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WCC Cup... Red~Alert vs. vitodeluca (R~A won)
Maestro Minded:
--- Quote from: R~A on June 23, 2003, 07:14:39 AM ---is that it ?the battles over?an what do u mean by connecting my bars?
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yes.. the battle is over.. you won..
lets take one of my bars as example
make this procedure short & tell me "whoever-you've-bitten-from" ~ claimin u battlez with "legit barz"?, fool u know "you've-never-been-written-some"//
as you can see, the entire bar have the same topic, its all about how the opponent is a biter...
it's critical for the miserable individual to diss the lyrical pinnacle to behold in audio an visual i'm spiritual when i spew syllables i spew miracles/
you bar^^ have 4 diffrent topics, and you're not elevating any of them, you said: "i'm spiritual when i spew syllables i spew miracles/", but what have spewing syllables have to be with being "spiritual"?? .. u understand my point?? you gotta try to stick to the same topic...
vitodeluca:
--- Quote from: Maestro on June 22, 2003, 08:35:35 PM ---
vitodeluca
your gramatics is skilled, but you have no dope punches really, i mean.. for example, your rhyming about sending him to Khomeini, without developping the subject, you need to work harder on the punches and specially on the flow. you also need to connect the sentences in each bar together (by developing the subject)
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I said that cause he's from Lebanon, anyways, damn, I lost, oh well, not gonna bitch about it. Shit Red, when I saw I pulled you in the first round I was like "fuck!" Anyhow, good luck homie, maybe I'll get in through the wildcard. Peace. Oh yeah, Maestro, are you votin' on the battles that elite guys are in or what? Cause I noticed M-Dogg's votin the other ones...
ARYC:
"I said that cause he's from Lebanon"
khomeiny is from iran
an yeah i'd like to battle ya again if ya get the wildcard.anyways good luck,i thought i was gonna loose for sure .lucky for me ur verse wasn't the best i've seen u spit
"i'm spiritual when i spew syllables i spew miracles"
i see ur point.thanx
Maestro Minded:
--- Quote from: vitodeluca on June 23, 2003, 09:49:34 AM ---
--- Quote from: Maestro on June 22, 2003, 08:35:35 PM ---
vitodeluca
your gramatics is skilled, but you have no dope punches really, i mean.. for example, your rhyming about sending him to Khomeini, without developping the subject, you need to work harder on the punches and specially on the flow. you also need to connect the sentences in each bar together (by developing the subject)
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I said that cause he's from Lebanon, anyways, damn, I lost, oh well, not gonna bitch about it. Shit Red, when I saw I pulled you in the first round I was like "fuck!" Anyhow, good luck homie, maybe I'll get in through the wildcard. Peace. Oh yeah, Maestro, are you votin' on the battles that elite guys are in or what? Cause I noticed M-Dogg's votin the other ones...
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yup..
vitodeluca:
I know Khomeni is from Iran, it was a stretch...but your avatar said "arab has entered the airport.." ect. Plus I thought ayatollah and I though I told ya would make a nice multi.. ;D
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