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WCC Cup... SiNiStEr vs. Bez

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bez:

--- Quote from: SkillZ on June 17, 2003, 11:46:08 PM ---
--- Quote from: Bez on June 17, 2003, 07:01:09 AM ---I dissed you once through karma because as soon as you posted your excuses up my karma had gone from -21 to -22 so I figured fuck it.  I dont waste my time doing karma lad.

vitodeluca, if multis and shit has alot to do with this battle then mack shouldent be going thru for a start.  If I get thru to the next round then my verse is good be full of all this multi shit just to shut all you guys up.  End of the day like I have been saying my verse was full of disses, it was a battle verse not a verse to show off how many break-ya-neck, leave ya lickin up-ma-sweat bullshit multis I can use.

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Disses? were not looking for disses in a text battle were looking for strong points like

Good Multis
Punches & Wordplay
Decent Flow
Vocab

Your battle verse had normal "i'm a textcee" level shit your personals werent all that great and your flow wasnt that dope ... i give it to you you had a nice flow but at key points you fell off at times

MOST TEXTCEES and the good ones judge but "creativity" that comes from dope wordplay n mutlis packed in to a strong punch with a personal if added

Weak Diss Ex: You cant spit shit bitch, you suck nuts
^wow can you see the creativity in that one?^

Strong Punch Ex: Like hookers you always "suck" n' swallow jus' "cant spit"
^a lil more creativty more wordplay add multis and BAM holy fucking shit you jus' became ill^

Going on nothing but flow "might" work for audio heads but this is text

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tell me then where was the example of a good multi in your example?

If thats what a multi is then as I have said I dont even need to use em, my verse was prob full of em but just not outlined.  I really dont understand how that makes ya verse better.

Tell me then is this a good example?

I was once a soilder, now I'm a troop without-tha-weapon,
I'm articulate like a teacher the way I always try to teach-a-lesson,
I'm ain't one-for-messin, I figure that lifes-a-blessin,
So everyday I take it easy, I ain't into-stressin,
I ain't always been this way, life was once nottin-but-hatred,
Like rabit outter 8 Mile I was alwayd determined-to-make-it,

da_notorious_mack:
they werent multis....

bez:

--- Quote from: Mack on June 18, 2003, 08:19:19 AM ---they werent multis....

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explain then son

da_notorious_mack:
this is an example of multis

Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space


raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space

bez:

--- Quote from: Mack on June 18, 2003, 12:36:03 PM ---this is an example of multis

Im raising-the-stakes,blazin-the-fakes
so youngun dont try ivadin-our-space


raising,blazin,invadin all rhyme as do stakes,fakes,space

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rightington, I will try to use that method in my future rhymes.  Cheers mackstein

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