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{Tag Titles} Mack an R~A vs Tha7th an Maestro <<<winners

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Maestro Minded:

--- Quote from: SCY on June 21, 2003, 09:54:32 AM ---fucking newbies

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lol at that ^^

SCY:
i am not gona banned agen am i ??

·SiNiStEr·:

--- Quote from: R~A on June 20, 2003, 09:16:18 PM ---"ya 2nd line used 2 rhymes from someone's avatar on this board"

u mean "sypmphony" with "epiphany"? check out pharoe jomes avatar,i was reading his sig an the punch popped into my head ,u can read it if u want it has nothin to do wit my punch.unless u consider rhymin "symphony" wit "epiphany"bitin then lock me up an throw away the keys

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yes... exactly as i had said

da_notorious_mack:
more votes..?

vitodeluca:
Mack: I enjoyed your verse and the way you used longer bars and a more intricate style than you commonly do.  Your flow was on point and your multis were dope but your punches coulda been harder and in some cases didn't really make sense to me..i.e. the thing about I-Bo playin' chess alone/having no friends.  I mean, yeah, sayin he has no friends is a punch, but didn't really hit that hard.  Plus in the last part you said you got no bullets for..aids infested shitty rappers (I liked that punch btw) but then contradicted yourself by saying you'd put 5 in their door.  Overall I'd give your verse

3.9/5

Red Alert:  I liked your verse too, it was short but it had some good metas and I'm a sucka for multis (easily impressed by them) and yours were good and on point which is more than I can say for many that try and use em. (includin' myself, lol)  In this verse your flow seemed to be kind of off (bar length varied greatly one to the next) and your punches, while creative at times, didn't hit as hard as the ones I've seen you throw in other battles (i.e. robin hood/green tights, can't hit straight/homophobic convention).  Plus, your last bar was kinda repetitive using muthaf's twice.  Overall an allright verse but I've seen you do better.

3.5/5

Rod: Hard hittin' verse man.  All your punches were pretty dope and you attacked well.  At first brush I was thinkin' "damn, that's kind of a simple rhyming style" because of the lack of multis and the way many of the bars only rhymed the last word but you made it work for you.  Good metas and good flow.  

4.2/5

I-BO: Allright man, you diss my verse then ask me to vote in your battle? Hahaha, j/k man.  Here goes: Tight multis that sacrificed your flow in some parts, i.e. the bar about neo in the matrix.  Still, good punches and you had some good shit to make it personal against Mack.  Some of your metas were a little thin, like in your first line, it mighta made more sense if you said somethin like "I'm like santa clause handin out coke/ dope deliveries" or "tony montana in a santa clause outfit", I dunno.  Still, good verse overall you seemed to have a little of each of the keystyle elements

4/5

So averages out to VDK: 3.7/5
Rod/I-bo: 4.1/5

Winner: Rod & I-bo

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