WCC Cup... 2nd Nature vs. Adam X (2ndNature won)

[M Dogg™]

Alright, this is the first round of the WCC Cup. The winner stays, the loser can go home. But there is a wild card spot, so maybe the loser can return, we'll see. But you'll go against a Hall of Famer in TimeLock, so good luck with that. Rules...

bar max - 10 (I ain't reading over 160 bars to judge, trust me, go over and get DQed, sorry)
Due by Tuesday, June 17, 2003
I judge, but if you think that I was unfair, you can ask for a 2nd opinion, and I'll get another vet to make the call. After all, I'm judging 16 verses at once, kind of hard. So good luck.

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

Ayo, You aint go to the words to test my verbs and I've heard the best of you/ I'll swerve and wreck your crew on purpose and call a hurst to rescue you // (1)Burn Natures shoes and give you cold feet to curb your speech like false teeth//(2) It's like an old dream these recurring events of AdamX hurtin the vets/ And when I burst your defense it's gonna be messier than a surgical bench//(3)  Leaving your nerves in shreds, your severed flesh leaves a permanent stench but im still servin it fresh// (4)

::Skratch::

If ya lippin son, I'll grip the gun and bury your whole click for fun/ Eclipse the sun, you're "testing your faith(fate)" like stickin dicks in nuns//(5) Nature finally grew some balls wanting to make a comeback, so I'm straight cleavin ya cap seasoned with snap//(6) Twist ya neck so fuckin quick I'll make breath on your back//(7) I'll take Fools for 500...will this kid ever step to me?/Nah...his chances of winning equal retards playing jeopardy//(


::Finishing it off::

ma shits the dopest....dependancy from my sentences, this is an addiction you can't cope with/ leave your wounds blistered and open//(9) back of kid.. my rhymes blown you out of existence, you come scared with no resistance/ If you wanna die slow, then nigga keep your distance//(10)


EDIT: Just numbered my bars cause 2nd Nature seems to have a problem with it.

[|JEM|ILL|]

...that was more then ten lines kiddo...but o well it's over....

Imma leave you ‘fuckin-flat‘, like tittie ‘sex-wit-minors‘!!!
My ‘team's' tech'll-find-yours, like ‘football' and wreck-ya-‘line‘-worse...
Slappin these wack heads, An' trap this ‘red neck‘...
Put him in a ‘sandwich' since ya whole families ‘inbred‘! (Inbred/In bread)

‘Slit ya throat' quick, cuz I got more ‘next-ta-be-rend‘...(Necks/Next)
Adams names a prophecy, he'll be Xed-in-the-end!!!*
There's line between ill and wack, that you wont need a proctor-to-see...
Adam gives ‘mad' ‘BRAINS‘, my Penis gots a ‘doctors-degree‘!!

Ya chances of ‘scorin a win' was ‘over-quick‘...
Like the time you tried gettin a ‘sober-bitch‘!!


|*|= AdamX it's the end letter in his name, just another play on names...

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

bar max - 10 (I ain't reading over 160 bars to judge, trust me, go over and get DQed, sorry)
Due by Tuesday, June 17, 2003

It says 10 bars... not 10 lines, theres a difference. I got long bars... that's my style... ain't gonna change ma style according to yours. Anyways nice verse... Peace

[|JEM|ILL|]

...thats more then 20 lines(10 bars)...also...

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

20 lines don't necessarily mean 10 bars... anyways ima number my bars for all you kids who got problems with it

[abstruse]

Damn Jem, shit was short, but hard as fuk, nice verse.

"Slappin these wack heads, An' trap this ‘red neck‘...
Put him in a ‘sandwich' since ya whole families ‘inbred‘! (Inbred/In bread)"
 

[AdamX aka Xplicit]

yeah nice line... Kinda pointless since I'm as black as can be ...dawg you posted after you saw my verse, the way i count your verse its 5 bars...you could have made it longer...  my shits a lot longer than yours so you just gave me the advantage. But i guess you realize that...
peace

[M Dogg™]

Two very hard hitting verses. I understand AdamX's verse, so I ain't tripping over length. I will say this though, Jemel came short, but hard as hell. LOL... even though Adam is black I guess, the line was tight as fuck. AdamX had the nun line, that was like... that's tight, but Jemel also had the flat tittie line, and it seems with his short verse, he had more punches that were pulled off.

vote=2ndNature

[|JEM|ILL|]

First Rounds over...lets get this shit poppin...