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WCC Cup round 2... TimeLock vs. vitodeluca

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.:TimeLock:.:
u lose credit when u edit words, so long after u post, it just leaves wide open, fa me to flame broil ya rump roast/
so someone call a medic, cuz vito gone need one really close, these flames I spit designed to burn this honey host/
from coast to coast, i'll butter u on both sides and eat u like some burnt toast/

vito i slice u like cheese, spread ya blood thick-like-jam, beat ya barz-down-quick, like a-battering-ram/
stick ya bettween 2 peices of bread and eat u to silence like-a-lamb/
I'm assined time to bomb u like-sadam, here to put u fully outta flight, like-panam/
I seen life from the start, from Eve-and-Adam, but lately i been fed up with these vito fags, Steves-and-Adams/
when i spit i slipt brains-and-atoms, i rip heads universally from spain-to-saturn/
spit so detailed i rewrite ya brain's history with my-rhyme-pattern/
ya minds not playing tricks on u, vito's ryhme really-been-forgotten/
I planned this so my srcipts stand out, my spit's in time and by far excceeds-the-modern/

vitodeluca:
You know who's votin on this timelock?  Just wonderin'.  Oh, also, is there any rules about editing your verse in the cup?  I figured you would know since you've done this before.  Thanks.

vitodeluca:
Does anyone know who's votin on this???  The suspense is killin' me....

bLaDe:
I'll make this vote short.  Vito, nice verse man, appreciated the complexity of many bars, cool flow, nice similies etc.  Had some nice multies too, strong lines, couple of personals.  Overall its a pretty good verse no doubt, props.
Time lock, good flow, you had a couple of bars which were pretty good, you my homie, but overall, I gotta say you can do better man.  Its like you didnt try much for this battle.  Oh yeah, Mdogg said no sexual punches etc, but I noticed you calling him a fag.  :-\ Cool verse but it didn't put up against Vito's in my eyes.  So I gotta give this to him.

Vote - Vitodeluca

  -{bLaDe}

·SiNiStEr·:
hhahahaaha nice fucken job vito..

beatin #1 like it wuz nuthin..

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