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WCC Cup semi-finals... Sinister vs. Red~Alert (Sin Won)

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·SiNiStEr·:
feedback appreciated.. and/or a vote

Dj Mex:
Way a sec wrong Sinister is the better my vote goes to sinister.

.:DayGoStyLz:.:

--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on July 19, 2003, 02:45:18 PM ---~Wanted my autograph on his bullets so he sent-'em-first, signed it, sent it back with a bundle-of-dirt, so he could bury himself and befriend-the-earth//

~Die and melt make you a deceased chameleon, Bitch be glad you winnin-some, only way you gonna recieve a cup is by stealin-one//

attacked-it, took his brain and compacted-it

~Shots'a comin, pop-'n-ya-head-burst, I'll make you dubcc's bitch like rock-did-fred-durst, you may be scared but it'll be smart to try and stop-the-lead-first//

--- End quote ---

Good verse man, i know theres only one judge...and im not voting on these battles since im takin on the winner. But, jus a couple things dogg...

A lot of those arent multies. "Bundle-of-Dirt" doesnt make a multi with "sent-em-first" or "befriend-the-earth"....

Plus, u wanna make sure they have the same amount of syllables...."pop'-n-ya-head-first"/"Rock-did-Fred-Durst"...the second string is missing jus one syllable. Maybe if u threw a "tah" after "did" lol. "Rock-did-tah-Fred-Durst" would flow betta. Not tah dissect yur verse man...yur metas and wordplay are off tha chain. The multies are jus sumthin that i always notice in a verse....peaccccce

·SiNiStEr·:
i feel you.. 'multi king'

usually my multis are on tap but that was a short deadline and i was just thinkin of random punches..

plus i dont use tha-fah-mah-a-tah so its a lil harder for those of us who speak english to put together multis.. lol

thanks for the feed though ton-ton.. i dunno bout the other battle though lol

ARYC:
"Way a sec wrong Sinister is the better my vote goes to sinister."

WHAT!!!!??!?!?!?!?!?!? DAMN U DAMN U TO HELL!!!!

a headache is starting to take over me.....a headache only cured when the sorrow of losing so close to the final...
what have u done!!!!!

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