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abstruse:
Wrote this after getting out of Government Class.
they say we're ensured by civil-rights //
but they control every aspect of life, like signal-lights //
knight sticks will fly taking no residence-in-exception //
ya skin color being the only evidence-in-perspective //
so i'm confused of what laws are truely enforced //
probable cause is seeing a group of colored in-fours //
i see the police and feel an urge-they'll-harm-me //
then ask to advocate injustice, and serve-in-their-army //
travel to distant lands, and help kill innocent-families //
great arsenal of democracy, thats an ignorant-fallacy //
let the youth be the jury, as we drop philosophical-lessons //
while you cover up your appeal to fictious biological-weapons //
Kinda short, will add-on to it though...Drop feedback. [thnx :)]
Reef:
Pretty ill rhymin.. Flow was tight too.. nice to see some educated shit bein dropped..
da_notorious_mack:
that was ill homay.....nice multis flowed well an dope content...
|JEM|ILL|:
What up SLAVE...
anywayz...
Multis...nyah, they were mad forced and you know it, multis need to be able to be comin of the tip off the tongue, Vocab isn't bad but it's fuckin the flow up a lil cuz ya syllables got a lil off...
The Concept was a good idea, some lines made a good point but it wasn't overall great... So it's cool...nice shit Ab
abstruse:
stfu i aint no slave!!!! haha. naw i know what you mean. thnx for feedback.
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