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WCC Cup semi-finals... Mack vs. vitodeluca vs. Thaprophecy
M Dogg™:
Alright, I'm calling this one right down the middle. Now before I do any voting... I will say i was trying to do this as fair as possible. Vito had a funeral, he was on a plane all day for two days, and was at another person's home the rest of the week. I really doubt he was thinking WCC Cup, so I let him in. The other two lost in the last round, but both of the people that beat them, did not show up for the semi finals, so I let them back in, not knowing what had happen to Vito. So I tried to be fair, but in trying, everything looks really bad. Now remember, in the beginning, I stated that each person, if they lost, has a right to a second opinion, so if either man that lost feels I was unfair, you can ask another mod to vote. Here we go.
Mack, a descent verse. It was not the greatest thing to come from you, but then again Pr1mo wasn’t ghost writing either… j/k. But the verse was actually really good, and it had a nice flow. Though I will say not much stands out, as it has a nice pace with good punch lines. “constantly trippin,cryin,most a WCC hope a lorry-had-hit-him..
i mean c'mon what kind a motherfucka makes a thread sayin "im sorry-fa-bitchin" That was my favorite line, as that personal did kill a lot of Prophecy’s creditability. Overall, an above average verse, 4.0
vito, a good verse, at some points unfocused, but overall a solid verse. Your rhyme scheme was good, and the metaphors where better than the other two. You started strong, and ended strong. Though in the middle, you seemed unfocused, though it did still make sense. Overall, I think you came out strong, with a very good verse. A B+ verse, or 4.3
Prophecy, you had me going to start off with. At very first, I just glaced at them, read your first two bars, and was like… oh shit, Prophecy won. But, as I read over the verses again, I realize that you didn’t do as well I had hoped. Your opening is good, but instead of trading punched, like the others, you went to insults, and unless the insults have backing, or are done well, “Surgical options wont change ya indentity/ ya still a faggot, and son there is no fuckin rememdy//With one shot ill erase ya past, present, and future/ ya wounds be needin suture, ill blast seven then boot-chya//” does not get it done this late in the WCC Cup. This is were the lyrical game is played, and you didn’t come out great today. But it’s ok, there is next time, and you would be a good middleweight contender from what I’ve seen of you. But today, 3.3
Winner = vitodeluca
da_notorious_mack:
--- Quote from: Batman on July 25, 2003, 11:03:12 PM ---
Mack, a descent verse. It was not the greatest thing to come from you, but then again Pr1mo wasnt ghost writing either
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--- Quote ---in one week,how ill-is-that?,i kill-a-track,judges hate biters so we get shook-votes..
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see...i speak the truth in my rhymes...lol j/p
Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
yo m dogg thanks for the input man...i noticed the rest was weak..i was feelin it at the beginnging then i just lost focus...i know i can do better, and i will keep improving as i go along, and ur guys' input helps...thansk dogg
good luck vito
maximus:
howd ^^^he make the semi final n how in the fuck u vote for vito in this shit.. i mean no offence... mack tore it.. i dunno if its coz u dnt want an ex bita in the final or coz vito is in ya crew or u jst got ya lines crossed but its clear to see... mack had personals multis betta punches
~1~
da_notorious_mack:
--- Quote from: AutoMatik1 on July 26, 2003, 01:58:43 AM ---howd ^^^he make the semi final n how in the fuck u vote for vito in this shit.. i mean no offence... mack tore it.. i dunno if its coz u dnt want an ex bita in the final or coz vito is in ya crew or u jst got ya lines crossed but its clear to see... mack had personals multis betta punches
~1~
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YO I WERENT GUNNA SAY NOTHING..BUT IF THE PEOPLE ARE SAYIN IT...I WANT SOMEONE ELSE TO JUDGE THE VERSES...
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