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My First Write Up

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Storm:
Give me some feedback please...

Lyrical tactics make my rhymes classic, jurassic/
I stay on top like an attic/
I've had it...of whack niggaz who try to start static/
don't know im more dangerous than acrobatics with this automatic (BANG!)/
shit I do drugs but I aint no motherfuckin addict/
I'm an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/
I got a gun slut, Empty out your wallet, all of it/
Now let me back it up now and introduce my name/
I'm that motherfucker Storm takin over this game/
I'm not in it for the cash, im in it for the fame/
Getting tired of all yall rappin bout the same thangs/
shits lame, but I don't blame/
I just claim...that im the best...so don't contest/
Or else you'll need to wear a vest/
So I suggest...yall settle for less, admit that im blessed/
And let your motherfuckin mouth rest...

abstruse:
Good Job if its your first write up. Keep dropping.

T.J.:

--- Quote from: Storm on July 23, 2003, 09:26:14 PM ---
I'm an alcoholic, call it what you wanna call it/



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heehee..... xzibit
besides that, not bad for a first spit.

Slim-x:


It Was Cool But Ta Me It Sounded Like Eminem.........

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
aight shit dogg keep droppin

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