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T.J. VS Slim-X (VOTE)

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T.J.:
Professor Xavier? best believe in that wheelchair you locked tight/ 1
named your label DarkCide, coz its clear that you not bright/ 2
your desperate for punches like mexicans are desperate to jump the border/
plus, you couldnt flow if your name was redman, in muddy waters/ 3
claims your a "thugg pimp" but you couldnt pick up a hoe from a warehouse/ 4
u bust slugs limp, may i see that Glock? you didnt tell me it shot flares out/
this guy aint piss to me, i'll make you like Michael Jackson, "History"/
when people state ya whackness its like debating hitler, u cant disagree/
my style is like carbon in the form of diamond, its regarded the hardest/5
slim, how can you run your own label when you cant spell "artist"?/ 6

10 bars, short n sweet


1 - Professor Xavier is from X-Men, he in a wheelchair.
2 - He got a label named DarkCide.... check The Lab
3 - Redman got an album called muddy waters
4 - hoe=garden tool
5 - Carbon in the form of diamond is the hardest element on Earth.
6 - once again, check the thread in The Lab. you'll see.


PLEASE OUT Y'ALL ;D
get voting now

ARYC:
ok ok here goes...
slim x:
ur verse was really really basic,u rhymed words like "crime" wit "rhyme", an sum words don't even rhyme like "tear" with "bear" + u didn't have any metaphores ,punches or smilies it just didn't seem like a battle verse + the bars were missmatched (one is long one is short)
anyway keep practicing

T.J.:
nice punches an personals ,u had sum multies like "locked bright" an "not bright",they r basic multis but it's better to use little multis then to use long forced ones that fuck up the flow

therefore winner:



T.J.

T.J.:
thanx for the vote.... keep em comin.... 1-0

|JEM|ILL|:
T.J. beaten up on Newbies? shame shame...lol

Vote: TJ got this every aspect of his verse was better...

·SiNiStEr·:

--- Quote from: God's 2nd Nature on July 26, 2003, 06:35:43 AM ---T.J. beaten up on Newbies? shame shame...lol

Vote: TJ got this every aspect of his verse was better...

--- End quote ---


my vote for TJ but damn man.. face someone with some skill

you been here long enough

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