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|JEM|ILL|:
15 lines...
Due Some time today...


No Beef Homie!

Its a fine day to look inside this nigga with kitchen-knives...
Damn, like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!

Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!
Strictly, he blowin-my-vorheez... I had to kick-him-off...
"Puttin words in his mouth" since-"my-dick-can-talk"!!
Flip-ya-script-an'-all, Softy trigger? pull-it,-try'n-stop-me...
"Got ya mug shot"...Even got some "bullets-beside-his-coffee"!!
Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!!
Obssesion-isnt-right, after ya death...where do I go-since?
Since I "partied like it was '99", left the scene with no-"prints"!(Prince)

*He's Mexican...

abstruse:
My bad for the delay, they're layin down tile at my house, so I had to move everything including the computer.

Anyway Props on the Verse. But like Supernat, 'service, concentration, watch how real emcee rocks the house'. NO BEEF@

OoO boy...

lets begin-the-inception, i'm wet from front to back like the fisheys //
kid's yet-to-get-an-erection, and is askin 'can anyone beat-me ??' //  (He's 14)
ya styles dead, bettah yet deceased, i'm the winner who set-doubt?? //
cuz like ya position with elite, ya shoulda had this challenge LEFT-OUT //
ya best to set up a border, or throw them racial jokes and try to use-a-fence (offense) //
or you can round up ya Nigerian Friends, cuz you'll need all the AIDS you-can-get // (aid)
dude ya whole styles tainted, flow's broken like bank accounts from hammer //
relax ya shit kid cuz ya aint-shit, cuz neither you or M&M's melt-in-wrappers (melting rappers) //
WINNING ??
maybe when im drunk seein two Jems, cause in battles your gone-when-its-sober //
and people can say ya got overconfidence, but 10 bars got ya confidence-over //

·SiNiStEr·:
Jemuel - Hard hittin as always.. time metas, multis, came with everything just another jem verse but it was still up to par.

Fav. Line -
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!

Abstruse - wow, i see that you sorta used Jem style against him, which is new and it hasnt been done before, interesting. Truthfully, I think each verse came as hard but Abs had personals.. also jem placed the race card so did you.. nice shit homie.

Fav. Line -
ya best to set up a border, or throw them racial jokes and try to use-a-fence (offense) //
or you can round up ya Nigerian Friends, cuz you'll need all the AIDS you-can-get //

Numbaz..
Jemuel - 4 / 5
Abstruse - 4.35 / 5

IMO both verses came the same as hard hittin, Jem had better flow but Abs came with a personal every line.. no prewritin..

Vote - Abstruse

abstruse:
vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :o

vitodeluca:
Vote- Abstruse

Jem, your verse was good, but lacked personals and some of the multis seemed forced.  Still a good verse but Abstruse came with more of a verse aimed at you personally and he had some good metas, even tho he wrote off ya verse a little.  Tight battle tho, just have to give it to abstruse...

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