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Abstruce VS Jemuel

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Slim-x:
Vote :Jemuel    Rate : 7.8 Vs 7.4

My Bad


Tha Info On How And Why I Vote Fo Jemuel

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1. I Like Tha Start ( like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"! )


Its a fine day to look inside this nigga with kitchen-knives...
Damn, like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!


2. This Was Cool As Fuck



Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/


3. This Part Is Good But Could Be Better


"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!


4. Was Ok

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Strictly, he blowin-my-vorheez... I had to kick-him-off...

5. It was Funny As Hell


"Puttin words in his mouth" since-"my-dick-can-talk"!!


6. Very To Tha Point.


Flip-ya-script-an'-all, Softy trigger? pull-it,-try'n-stop-me...

7. Hardcore

"Got ya mug shot"...Even got some "bullets-beside-his-coffee"!!

8. This Part Was Cool (

Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!! )


Sloppy nigga, Look at the wack degression-of-ya-rhymes...
Take a "golf club to ya head", "provin depression's-in-ya-mind"!!
like a "pregnant dogs" we all knew you was "half bitch-inside"!ince I "partied like it was '99", left the scene with no-"prints"!(Prince)
*He's Mexican...

bez:
This was a hard one dogs, both of you dropped cool verses but this is how I saw shit.

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Jem:  Dope verse, everything flowed very well and the structure of the rhyme was dope and on point.

Fav line(s):
Toyin with strangers, leave ya cold like an Eskimo/
Im on top of "us(U.S.)" like "Canada", you resembling "Mexico"!!*
You know you the next to go... flowin-and-rhyme-stories/
"Dont know who you fuckin with", like getting "thrown-in-blind-orgies"!!

Them first lines where dope, punches where strong and it just entertained me while reading it.

Score:  4.50

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Abstruse:  Smae to you mate, nice verse, some very nice mutlies and the structure of the verse was also dope.

Fav line(s):
maybe when im drunk seein two Jems, cause in battles your gone-when-its-sober //
and people can say ya got overconfidence, but 10 bars got ya confidence-over //

Felt them lines alot, nice way to finish the battle.

Score:  4.25

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Both verses where good and the battle was dope but Jem's verse had me more entertained throughout and the verse was hard hitting and more personal than Ab's.

VOTE:  JEM

abstruse:
Hey yo Slim-X, I seen you vote for couple other battles also, we usually give supportin information to how we voted, if ya could juss write a lil bit, then it'll count.

|JEM|ILL|:
MAJOR PROPS ABS...

my hardest battle here yet...i love it!

abstruse:
Thnx. So what we going up to 4? since it's already 2-2 and we never really cleared that up. I'm cool with 4 or wahtever the fuk. VOOOOOOTES!!!!!!!

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