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Some new shit...gimme some feedback plz

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Storm:
My shits harder than concrete, straight from streets/
I'm here to bring heat, prove my shits elite/
So please take a seat and pay attention now/
Cause this is some classic shit that's bout to go down.
I'm the motherfuckin Storm coming with thunder and rain/
Strike you down with lightning to cause you mad pain/
If you try to run than bitch you'll be slain/
And I have no problem killing like you was Able and I was Cain/
If you still don't understand then I'll be glad to explain/
If you fuck with me than you better be insane/
Cause I got a gang of weapons to put you 6 feet deep/
And when its my life or your life its mine I plan to keep/
So peep this, Storm is takin over/
You betta give me respect and not the cold shoulder/
Cause you know I'll crush your ass like a motherfuckin boulder/
So remember this shit so I don't have to say that I told ya.


Please gimme some feedback and advice. Thanks.

Reef:
It was cool man... Liked the flow.. keep spittin and elevatin'

|JEM|ILL|:
Guessin you just started Keystylin?...lol it's all good homie...Lets see...Seems like your flows on point. I have no problem with it to tell you the truth just you need to drop a couple lines every now an' then that'll make people say "WHOA".

IM me or send me a private message if you want some advice...Keep illin

Storm:
yea im new, thanks man, i guess ill start putting some more thought into my shit. peace.

Slim-x:


Was Up

I Like Tha Flow

Rated At 7.5  

Good Skillz

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