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Bez vs. Jem
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--- Quote from: RODZILLA a.k.a tha7th on July 29, 2003, 02:01:30 PM ---
--- Quote from: Jemuel on July 29, 2003, 01:44:55 PM ---Ya face’ll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!
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LOL.....y'all kno wat that means!!!
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That I wrote it on Microsoft Word? yea...
abstruse:
Jem - Nice verse. The metas and wordplay were on point, you didn't have many multies but its cool. The punches were on point, although they could have been used at anyone. Ya lack personals. Overall - 4
Fav line...
Landing a slap when I snap in a violent burst
Ya face'll be wearing palms like a hawaiian shirt!!
Bez - Coo verse. The metas and wordplay werne't really there. I found you were reppin yourself the first 4 bars or so. Ya need to work on your punches dawwg, I know you keystyle, but punches make or break battles, and I didn't see any witty ones. Overall - 3.5
Fav line...
I'm so evil, they devil's jealous of me, packin more flames than a Burger-King-Wopper//
You nottin but a weasel another slaves in chains as I'm murdering ya like Hopper//
Overall Vote - Jem[/color]
vitodeluca:
Jem, good verse, ya punches are startin' to sound a little familiar tho, prolly cause you battlin' like 4 peeps right now, LOL. Still, solid verse, familiar style, good multis, overall I'd say 4/5
Bez-ya shit's gettin' better put ya still could come with some harder punches. A better verse than usual, but at some parts not easy to understand, i.e. "ruby without the wax"? Anyhow, I'd say 3.7/5 or so, so vote goes to Jem
Vote=Jem
bez:
--- Quote from: vitodeluca on July 29, 2003, 08:43:06 PM ---Jem, good verse, ya punches are startin' to sound a little familiar tho, prolly cause you battlin' like 4 peeps right now, LOL. Still, solid verse, familiar style, good multis, overall I'd say 4/5
Bez-ya shit's gettin' better put ya still could come with some harder punches. A better verse than usual, but at some parts not easy to understand, i.e. "ruby without the wax"? Anyhow, I'd say 3.7/5 or so, so vote goes to Jem
Vote=Jem
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Ruby Wax is a famous tv presenter here in Britain.
I really cant understand what voting goes on in this forum, seems to change everytime I drop a rhyme.
vitodeluca:
Well, seein' as I live in the US, I don't know that little tidbit. I voted honestly tho, always do...basically the main shortcoming of your verse was your punches didn't hit that hard, that's all.
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