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Bez Vs. @ss@sin (BEZ WINS!!!!)

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bez:
1-0 lid

VOTEES!!!!!!!

Disceptive AssAssin:
dam...

bez-1
ass-0

·SiNiStEr·:
Assassin - flow was messed up, lol, the words were aight, I suggest using a lil more unity in your rhyming words, it always helps. Sounded like a freestyle to me, only real creativity was in the last line.. you could have came harder than this.

Fav. Line -
Bullets blast then meet you, have a seat shows over/
you outta luck like a field of 3 leaf clover/

Bez - flow was good, content was good, you should really focus on making each bar some kind of hard hittin personal all relatin to the same subject and use multies, its the hardest thing to do lyrically but it wins battles, take my word for it, hehehe.

Fav. Line -
Ya rhymes are like comedy makin me laugh like a movie spoof on fraiser, Why you steppin to me dogg, your rhymes are so borin the netherlands have started usin em for euthanaisa//

Decen battle from both of ya..

Numbaz..
Ass - 2.8 / 5
Bez - 3.5 / 5

Bez came harder lyrically and even though assasin was usin personals, he wasnt rhymin about anythin more than his shotty. No imagery or metas or nuttin like that.. bez pm me if you want a extended crit.

Vote - bezzy boy

Disceptive AssAssin:
alright 2-0 bez.... whos next to take shaft

bez:
2-0 dogg!

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