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Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
sit back and flip tracks on the dual vestax/
theres a whack tax for all the shitty rap cats/
im testin how ya brain reacts, to my barrage of lyrics/
its so loud ya hear it, so ill ya fear it/
im jus an omnipresent being/
here there and everywhre, u an adolecent fleeing/
the scene of this lyrical contest/
u tryin to escape my attack, but tahts nonsense/
check my concience but its nowhere to be found/
my sound pounds, its record book bound/
my antics are upon frowned, but im relentless/
knock ya ass out like gas at the dentist/
u made-up fake shit like a seventh day adventist/
ive sent this, enveloped in with anthrax/
call u a postal worker, openin with gas-masks/
afraid of my back-draft of rhyme-heat/
got ya head spinnin like spintek on chrome feet/
ya stuck back in ya seat, ya shocked in amazement/
time of death is now were not gonna save him/
call me the mortician, cuz i examine my kills/
so more like a psycho physician, takin too many pills/
bills bills, gimmicks n thrills/
u a dick ryda with too much time to kill/
thats it now ive had it, im done/
jus a little key to show ya where im comin from/



FEEDBACK appreciated

C-Bizz:
it was alright man. seemed to get better towards the end. keep doing yo thang.

Solomen Grundee:
Jesus christ. Your flow sux nutz and it is wayyyyyyyyyyyy toooooo simple, pop some multies, complex multies, imagery, twistin rhyme scheme, or a flipin rhyme scheme...plus it needs content...elevate

Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
who the fuck are u?

and i asked for feedback...not someone telling me what to do. i wasnt aiming for a complex verse...it was just a little freestyle off the top of my dome. so who the fuck are u to come at me like that. that was like ur first fuckin post. fuckin goof.

and yo Bizzle thanks for the input dogg.

Solomen Grundee:

--- Quote from: Proph Tha Chef on August 09, 2003, 02:33:36 PM ---who the fuck are u?

and i asked for feedback...not someone telling me what to do. i wasnt aiming for a complex verse...it was just a little freestyle off the top of my dome. so who the fuck are u to come at me like that. that was like ur first fuckin post. fuckin goof.

and yo Bizzle thanks for the input dogg.

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Constructive critisism...This is "Jem"'s brother...wise up homes

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