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Jemuel .:VS:. @ss@ssin

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Disceptive AssAssin:
uppin'

·SiNiStEr·:
Wooo iM bored..

Jemuel - good punches.. some of your punches were O.K. but you had some tight ones that flowed well and they had some mad creativity.. dope verse..

Fav. Line -
Straight spiking heads, hitting the floor n makin ya body-fall
When i'm 'serving @ss' over the 'net' like games of 'volley-ball'!!!

Assassin - nice verse homie, one of the better assassin verses but I couldnt help to notice that your multis are off..
Im investin-in-pain, insertin hollow-tips-in-ya-brain../
^^ not multis.. a good example usin that bar would be..
Im investin-in-pain simultaneously conquestin-Jem's-brain../
^^ moreless a decent multi.. gotta keep the syllables the same homie.. u know dis.. another example..
then ill choke-ya-ass till-ya-gasp and then ya turn purple.../
^^ lil change right herre..
Choke ya ass till-ya-gaspin, watch ya faint and fill-ya-casket, im the killa in vanilla-bastad../(bastard)
You get what im sayin..
Content wise the verse was aight, pretty hard hittin but U lackin some unity and ya multis were off so Ima have to take that into consideration..

Fav. Line -
This man spits more shit then a sewer... ya wreek dogg so stop the baths in cow manure.../

Numbaz..
Jemuel - 4 / 5
Assassin - 3.45 / 5

Vote - Jemuel

Disceptive AssAssin:
grr...

Jimmy Cash:
this was a a close battle for sure, but i'ma have to go with jem. sin pointded out the lack of untiy in the assassins verse, assassin came hard as fuck but jem had the word play

vote = jem

Disceptive AssAssin:
uppin'

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