Elements > Tha Studio
~:: ·SiNiStEr· ~vS~ Maestro ::~ Heavyweight Challenge!!!
Maestro Minded:
*PURGED*
keep the beef outta this thread
·SiNiStEr·:
thats 1-2.. keep em comin.. bez, where u at?
.:DayGoStyLz:.:
lol@ Jems ratings...
bez:
First of all ya'll dope battle. Some of the best wordplay I have ever seen in a battle on WCC was in this one so I give you both props for that. BOth rhymes where very good and I have struggled alot to figure out which one I liked better but I finally got there so lets get to it....
------------------------------------
Maestro: Holy shit mate, this verse was dope. The wordplay in this verse was amazing, although sometimes I didnt really understand what you where getting at I still thought that it was dope they way you used complicated words and combinations in your rhyme. I do think you over used it a bit though, I mean sometimes I was reading some of your bars and thinkin what the hell is he going on about, saying all stuff about meta forces and all this left me wondering where the hard punches where and shit.
You had some nice punches in there tho, but not really many hard hitting ones. Your multies where very dope and your flow was awesome so I give you credit for that. THe one thing I didnt like was the whole greek thing, what was that about? I thought you could of come up with something better than using greek words and meanings to fill up your rhyme.
The outro and personels part of your rhyme could of been worked on a bit more, the personels where hardly personels and the outro just seemed to end the whole verse a bit weakly IMO.
Never the less I thought the verse was fire, flowed amazing, wordplay was dope, multies where dope and on point, apart from one or two, personels where ok and punches where ok, thats where your verse lacked IMO.
Fav Lines:
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//
~ My "intellectual-forces" "with-impeccable-courses" - makes him 'gallop of the track' like "incompatible-horses"//
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//
SCORE: 4.50
-----------------------------
Sinister: This verse literally blew me away. I loved everything about it, the flow, the wordplay, the punches, multies, everything about it was amazing IMO. The flow wasn't really helped by the big bars but unlike some other people on the keystyle boards I am able to read the big bars in one breath and that means the flow for me was there and it was dope.
Your multies as always where dope, you came off very hard and they wasn't used just for the fuck of it, they where used to enhance the verse and make it flow and rhyme better and quicker and IMO it worked very well indeed. Unlike Maestro's verse your verse relied on straight hard hitting shit where as his releyed on more of an intelligent side of things. I am not saying your verse lacked any intelligence at all but I am just saying that whilst reading it I understood it more and actually because it was a tad more simplier I liked it a bit more.
Your verse painted some good clear pictures in my head and it provided me with everything I need in a good keystyle battle. Style, flow, complexion, multies, hard punches, not to many personels in there, but you made up for that with your good punches. This verse IMO is one of the best I have ever read.
Fav Lines:
~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//
~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
We got our own obese superman, with a spewing fountain-in-lip-tonite, encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//
Score 4.75
---------------------------------
I have given this battle to Sin because I thought his verse held all of the vital parts of a good keystyle verse and more. Maestro's verse was also very dope and I thought it proberly couldent be matched but Sin matched it and beat it IMO. His verse was straight up heat and it to me was a better verse than Maestros, not by much, but still better.
WINNER: SINISTER
da_notorious_mack:
i vot sinister...i will put up an explained vote in an hour or two.....im ina hurry at da mo...
Navigation
[0] Message Index
[#] Next page
[*] Previous page
Go to full version