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~:: ·SiNiStEr· ~vS~ Maestro ::~ Heavyweight Challenge!!!
·SiNiStEr·:
c'mon everyone drop a vote on this shit..
thanks to yall who voted but then again.. 7 votes win and its pretty even right now..
maestro i think we should allow kru votin.. holla @ me.. we can decide who can vote on each kru if u wanna.. im just thinkin its gonna be hard to get votes..
either way is coo.. just a suggestion to hurry it up..
pZ
Maestro Minded:
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 23, 2003, 01:30:38 PM ---c'mon everyone drop a vote on this shit..
thanks to yall who voted but then again.. 7 votes win and its pretty even right now..
maestro i think we should allow kru votin.. holla @ me.. we can decide who can vote on each kru if u wanna.. im just thinkin its gonna be hard to get votes..
either way is coo.. just a suggestion to hurry it up..
pZ
--- End quote ---
ok.. crew votes allowed
vitodeluca:
Allright...
Maestro- I liked ya verse and the way you use higher level vocabulary and complex imagery. Ya multis were really on point and it's cool to see them done well when a lot of people don't (myself included, lol). Ya verse didn't really flow that well for me, i.e. "Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"// . I mean, conduction codes and destruction modes rhyme, but the rest of it doesn't really flow for me. Some of your punches were pretty dope, i.e " ~ Sin's loosin this game, with mic skills like bad wrestlers talkin "to-the-crowds"//", that shit was pretty funny. You also had some semi good personals but given how much history Sin has here it seems you coulda come up with something better. Clearly a verse worthy of a heavyweight tho, just nothing exemplary in my mind.
overall 4/5
Sinister- Also a very tight verse, with good flow. Sometimes it seems to me that you sacrifice some content for the sake of having complex multis, and some of the stuff just loses me, i.e.,
~Obfuscate ya holy being at an obtuse-rate, ya clutched in the grasps of sin, to-lose-is-gay so I made painstaking efforts for you to-lose-this-way//
~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//
Didn't really get what ya were tryin to say here..you came harder as the verse went on though, I really liked this bar..
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
(although the first two multis didn't have the same # of syllables-7 vs. 8 respectively)
From this bar on you just came harder and harder and finished strong, I laughed my ass off bout the "see my asian tonight", hahaha. Anyways, good personals, better flow than Maestro, and good imagery and all that. Overall a real good verse, just lackin' in some parts.
Overall I'd say 4.2/5, I've seen better from Sin, but not by much cough*unaswered verse towards daygo*cough*
Alright, Maestro came tight, good vocab, good multis, flow was off, some good punches, some not, Sin came a little harder and more consistent, and he had the flow, so I'm givin' this battle to him. I'll understand if you don't wanna count my vote since I'm elite, but I can honestly say that if Maestro posted the better verse I woulda voted for him.
Vote-Sinister
maximus:
Ima break every line down for yall
I-Bo
{~Personals~}
~ Sin’s like a bad version of Maestro, with a "beta-rhyming-kit" - equipped with punches, more patterned than "zeta-claiming-six"// *1
aight punch good creativity
~ Running & hiding, unaware of my "masses-vital-range" - he's making "history" by bein a part of the "fastest-title-change"// *2
lol good line
~ Claiming multis? don’t fool yourself with "three-syllables-rhymes" - check my logs to learn to spit "real-flammable-mines"// (mines as in landmines) *3
first half of line was good second fell off a bit
~ Its funny the way you're forced to "rip-styles" to "catch-a-win" - I "snatch-ya-chin", throwin you away like "garbage", just to "smack-ya-bin"//*4
lol this was aight
{~Lyrical~}
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//
^nice
~ 'Blinding his rhymes', he cant see me, like he "met-invisible-man - telepathically, infiltratin infrastructures, to rip his "meta-physical-can"//
^^shit was ill man
~ I "let-my-impeccable-plan", rip his 'face of' quicker than "Nicolas-Cage" - kickin his ass off a plane, like watching "Icarus'-staged"// *5
good shit again
~ My "intellectual-forces" "with-impeccable-courses" - makes him 'gallop of the track' like "incompatible-horses"//
lol that was nice
{~Punchez~}
~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldn’t stop my "de-molition-force"//
not bad
~ Bars way "above" his level when Maestro’s aiming "meta-forces" - killing Sin rawer than TX with deadly "meta-morphic"// *6
pretty good pretty good
~ I'll "let-tha-loss-hit" like iron bricks, "dipped-in-venom" - even if he were Copperfield, he couldn’t "trick-this-phenom"//
a bit played but was nice
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//
Ouch this was hard dawg
n ya outro was tight to good finisher, ya multis was on point, ya punches was on point, ya creativity was off the chains...
Sinister....
~My brainstormz cause tidal-waves, submit Maestro a victim to upload and get his vitals-razed, have ya illiterate ass subject tah what my recital-says//
this didn hit at all
~Obfuscate ya holy being at an obtuse-rate, ya clutched in the grasps of sin, to-lose-is-gay so I made painstaking efforts for you to-lose-this-way//
um this was a good line but didnt hit hard
~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//
this wasn really a punch didn hit
~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//
dis wasn a punch or personal
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
this was aight dawg u picken up a lil
~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//
flowed nice hit nothin
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
dawg da fuck was this? u better than this
~We got our own obese superman, with a spewing fountain-in-lip-tonite, encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//
lol this was good
~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//
coulda done more with this end ya career shit
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//
first half of the line was tight second half fell off
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
dis was nice lol
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]
keyboard punches is old but u flipped it nicely
~Push ya throne-back-tah-jersey, the 2nd exhibition of Cloud 9 ownage, Tones-attack-irks-me, even then I wont-lack-tha-mercy to laugh and watch you get thrown-back like mah-jersey//
this was tight ya best line...
dawg what happened? this verse was weak for u... a few punches that was aight maybe 2-3, personals didnt hit... had 1 or 2 good ones... multis was sick it seemed u focused on ya flow n scheme... a big NO NO... u can come better n u know it
Punches - I-bo
Personals - I-Bo
Multis - bout da same
Creativity - I-Bo
this was 1 sided to me I-Bo had the punches n personals sin didnt...
vote - I-Bo
peace
~1~
·SiNiStEr·:
dats koo.. then again i didnt 'label' my personal bars but they are still there.. every bar had some kinda personal in it for the most part..
lez finish the votin and i'll give some explanations on this battle..
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