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~:: ·SiNiStEr· ~vS~ Maestro ::~ Heavyweight Challenge!!!

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ARYC:
"drop a vote for ya homie?"

yeah aight

ONETIME:
6-4, hot battle.................keep em votes comin

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA:
hmmm, looks like alot of fishy shit is goin down behind da scenes eh?

maximus:
i know the personals sin... but they aint hittin him num sayin? u aint touchin him wit em u gotta re-word em n hit him hard... like not diss him coz hes from sweden diss him bout sumthin in sweden daz fucked up ..

~1~

ARYC:
ok i'm gonna vote now...

both of u came tight....but there can be one winner.

Sinister:

u came dope,the flow in sum parts was great in others it wasn't .ur bars weren't equal in lengh(?),and sum of ur multis weren't multis:
"encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//"

"encountering-kryptonite"  and   "ammounting-cellulite"

aren't real multis.

i know it seems i'm only pointing out the negative but i really liked ur verse.




Maestro:

u came dope too.i hated ur verse at first because of the greek words and greek mythology (i always had to referr to the explanations),but then i reread it (this time i knew what the greek stuff meant) and found it dope..

some of ur multis weren't real:

"extracting-his-spine" and"inflicting-these-crimes" may have the same number of syllables but only 2 syllables rhyme.
the flow was decent.


so in closing,u both were tight,but both were kinda weak in the multis area,the personals were ok...so here are ur scores

Sinister:4/5
Maestro:4.25/5


WINNER:MAESTRO

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