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Bez Vs. @ss@ssin((BEZ WINS!!!))

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bez:
10 bars
Due by sunday
3 votes

bez:
Ya couldent come-up-trumps, if you was a sick elephant porn collector, leave ya bum-wit-humps cos ya spit like a camel after a visit to the oral and anal medical centre//
Ya rhymes are more screwed than professional prostitute, with ever bar I read I see another super disease like ya been fucked up front by chemically enhanced STD's//
Ma lyrics will tighten ya ass up and make ya ring look Japense, to overcome constipation ya have to perform meditation but it won't be the first time in ya life ya been beggin on ya knees//
Ya lyrics are like a power shortage, they lack any real spark like a dark new-york-city after a lightning-bolt, Ya rhymin so shitty thought I already knew-ya-pity, I was wrong so I'm uppin the amps and makin ya jump outter ya boots wit a frightning-jolt//
Call me dick rider right?  But I'm still laughin, 3 defeats in as many weeks yet you ain't realised its ma heat and not my meat that leaves your ass-sassin//
Ya rhymin has no "control" as if you where drunk playin-the-flute, I wish I had a cake for that hole just to shut you up, or a button displayin-mute//
I laugh like a hyena cos like a terrorist son to blow is all ya learn, I'm takin advantage of your ass like you was an Al-Quada Network inturn//
Why can't ya accept-it, ya rhymes are defected, your lyrics are so wasteful a toilet would reject-it//
To beat me ya have to be like Bronson and perform a great-escape, cos I'll leave ya body with alzheimer's and we'll mourn-a-fake, leave ya skin peelin like ya was born-a-snake//
Ya name on ma list twice, nar wait make it triple, ya gettin left behind like one of three new babies beggin for a third nipple!!!//

Disceptive AssAssin:
dog... ya style is dull.. i dont give a fuck about the battle.. as long as i collect ya skull/
Ya shit is primitive..im infinitive... fuck the pedo punches/
Cuz competing wit me is harder then a fat dude trying to do crunches/
And i got some hunches.. about you being gay.. so "duct"from my stray... im like king "tut" when i spray/
Finishin this cat in 5 lines.. how bout that... how bout i rip ya spine stright out ya back/
And i dont need to write my verses, they still leavin herses/
I just key-em-up quickly, and this cat bleeds up swiftly/
And im slick like mistique, i descept in many forms, you rippin off other forums/
i CAN flow on and on and on-in, have this mutha fucka wraped up by dawning/
Last line, i burst threw, the nurse knew, i finished ya ass in ICU/   bitch

bez:
uppin, come on ya;ll

|JEM|ILL|:
eeeeehhhh....Not a great battle but a battle...Bez you had some weak multis I know how you emphasize on how speacial they are so you need to get them poppin if it's how you feel, some nonesense punchlines, played personal...not too great of a verse my man...

@ss@ssin.... Some one else jus got ya with an "ass" personal...lol...anyway flow could have some work done to it...and the punches weren't really there man... gotta chop on that...

SOME THING TO THINK ABOUT; Try switching up your Rhyme schemes instead of the a-a-b-b order because you both drop like that and it gets boring sometimes. So maybe every 3-4 lines give someone something else to bite on...

Vote: Bez

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