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~Mack vs Vito~ ..beefin..

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·SiNiStEr·:
aight fellaz..

btw a quick lil fuck you to you both for makin this shit so even.. lol

Mack - flow was hot, content was hot, focused on personals which was tight.. every line basically had a personal.. thats a major strongpoint. Ya rhyme scheme was pretty clean and i liked how ya bars all lined up, pretty raw

Fav. Line -
i win this,beat ya again,our record be lookin like a fuckin police-code..

13 bars on a friday,name-Mack-Jason,find vito's head in my fridge,an the brain-adjacent..
^^ this line was tight cuz the circumstances and imagery

Ol' Vito - ya multis are gettin better, they arent TRUE multis but they flow well so its still good. Barz were real long, I use long barz to but it makes a big difference in a battle like this where there is a limit and you can get twice the content that mack does. other than that Im glad ya used alot of wordplay and a few metas and such..

Fav. Line -
even if he beats me everybody still be jokin bout his history, wait and see, like writin' a knock knock with a sharpie, you's a joke permanently,//

Check-the-Karma, nobody likes ya ass, check-the-hall-a fame votes, everybody knows ya wack, check-ya-lack-a crew, nobody's got ya back, check ya self, ya shouldn't a stepped up Mack,//
^^ flow was hard, ya best bar in the verse..


Even though Vito had real long barz, it didnt really affect the flow, but you got alot more content than mack so I will take that into consideration. After lookin over a second time I think that Vito might have a lil advantage, both yall came hard with personals, but Vito came a lil more lyrical, used alot of multis, used some metas.. came together. Both yalls shit came real hard and this battle shaped up nicely but Ima have to give this one to vito..

Numbaz -
Mack - 4.1 / 5
Vito - 4.35 / 5

Vote - Vito

Mack if you gotta problem wit me votin on this one cuz i vote for vito thats fine wit me, but I know yall both appreciate feedback so thats what im here for..
yall both elevatin and its cool to see yall both drop quick and stayin active..
enough from me..

pZ

|JEM|ILL|:
...To be Fair since vito had sometimes 3 lines in what he calls a bar...Im counting 15 lines on each. Cuz that 3 line shit is straight bull...

Vito: The Urine line was dope...but resembles one of my punches against M-Dogg soooooo loss of creativity...Flow sucked bad, it was really hard to follow the content. multies were off in alot of places. No imagery some standard punches...THe Knock Knock Joke line was dope wordplay though.

Mack: Police Code line was dope. Chicken punch was dope. Pill line was dope. Found out the Daygo line was true, so it makes for a dope personal. Flow was consistent not as great as you normally have it, multis are casual. And 2 lines with nice Imagery...

Vote: Mack

vitodeluca:

--- Quote from: Jemuel on August 23, 2003, 03:49:42 PM ---
Vito: The Urine line was dope...but resembles one of my punches against M-Dogg soooooo loss of creativity...




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I didn't know you had used anything like this before, but oh well, thanks for the feedback.

maximus:
vote - mack

multis - mack half of vitos werent multis
Punches - Mack got em wit creativity
Personals - bout even
Creativity - Mack

reason? well for 1 vito at least doubled macks length and had a lot more filler... caught a few good lines the golden shower was aight, the bleach line was nice, n summa ya personals didn even hit like the how many crews does that make it line... weak

mack u was pretty weak to but u was more consistant feelin that sony bras line shit was nice

ya wouldnt a stood 1/2 a chance in the match if it werent fa ya friend-in-Elite..
an im not bendin-no-speech,but even DaYgO said ya verses send-him-ta-sleep..

good personals... n that pill abuse finisher was nice...

return the favour u slut puppets

~1~

da_notorious_mack:
2-1...uppin...

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