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~~ DeadSouljah vs Bez ~~

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DeaDSouLjaH:
RULES

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max bars:16
3-0, K.O.
no crew votes
all votes mus be explained

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will drop in another 10 minutes or something..
pz

DeaDSouLjaH:

--[unlimited flow]--


[1]DS had to resurrect, to gain back the lost respect, so he made these words connect, to lyrically affect, this totally unaware subject/
[2]now watch as this dick tries to recollect, the lines of other battle sites he checked, which he expect to infect my rhyme project/
[3]here's bez;; whose lines i assess and come to find out he lacks that lyrical finesse to progress as his lines i will supress when i spit shit faster and far in excess                                 
[4]i staunchly disagree that thee are anything close to an emcee, watch and learn from me as i take this shit to a higher degree/
[5]you top the list on the wack rymer survey , cause everyone sees your lines portray, that you and your mind are in total disarray/
[6]oh ya jus began to fret, son it aint over yet, watch as this melanin vet , gonna make more on that lyrical death threat/


--[switchin]--


[7]ooh!! i'm scared now facin the TT-winner , you muthafucka you're up against the emcee-sinner , you bite lines from a brintey mp3-for-dinner/
[8]fuckers like you been foolin around in the board while-i-was-not-around, shits gonna change now, watch as i redefine-the-style-n-sound/
[9]i'm going GANGSTARR style and imma bring you to your moment-of-truth , while you run and try to circumvent-this-ryme sleuth/
[10]i always bring new shit-to-the-table , to spit-you're-unable , ma lines explodin like those atoms that-split-when-unstable/
[11]cant come close to mah-unchallenged-flow , your lines bitten and over used like a-ravaged-hoe/
[12]you've got a picture of nasir-jones , dont fuckin insult him with your so called punches like disastrous-moans and the flow you possess from fred, the flinstones /
[13]i'll show why this foo suffers from lyrical-constipation thru me and my words which are a hellical-combination /
[14]got this dick facin; my lines which are a satirical-creation, unlike this abberation who spits wack shit cause he spits faster than he thinks like hysterical-masturbation/
[15]bez tried to escape da bullets i was droppin-in-tons,but DS was ruthless as if he was rapin-some-nuns/
[16]leave ya body discarded like saddam's-sons, thats what happens when you have mismatch battles with bombs-versus-guns/

bez:
I'm droppin icycle mines that means my lines-is-cold and then explodes, got no need to emphasise my lyrics but you, your droppin your rhymes-in-bold//
Written yours verse's before the battle then fillin in ma name, highlighten every word that rhymes the same//
I say your shits plain dogg, you ain't no soulja you a casket-born-troop, I bet in school the only hangin ya did was a basket-ball-hoop//
I'm at the frontline of the battle while your hidin at the back, ya need to retire for a second time cos ya rhymin, fact is wack//
Politically insitgatin this fiend before he see's ma burnin desire to crush-his-ability, tryin to kill me?, I'll push-ya-agility, leave ya feelin cheated on like Hillary, Ya gettin disposed of like a toiletree, cut ya up and you'll see me flush-ya-capillary//
Ya punches iz weaker than Ali in a 2003 rumble-in-da-jungle, I'm stayin humble-cos-ya-mumble lyrics like ya got a dislexic stutter to come through//
I've been labeled the most slept on mc by wcc, by me shootin ya off the top bunk is the only way you'll be sleepin on me//
You a soulja? well I'm the army-slayer, tryin to act tough when the only clips (Clipse) you've ever loaded has been into your cd-player//
Your shit weak your using words that don't even make sense, your shits so old its actually classed as past tense//
Ya couldent attack me strongly if you was reppin-in-stealth, ya should take advice from cube cos ya should be checkin-ya-self//
I'm exposin ya for the fool you are squeezin ya heart-wit-fear, cos my rhymes are sicker than interviews with martin-bashir//
You a outkast from the regulars cos ya rhyme-so-weak, ma shits so fresh so clean, but your shits nastier than an insomiac Christina cos she aint fine-without-sleep//
Look at your crew man its fallen yet you still reppin-it-sucessfully, ya remain different cos everyone of you quitted now u strugglin up broken stairs, but you ain't steppin-next-to-me//
Did you study the dictionary all day-and-night to write that rhyme right? shits still weaker than a queer with no fists, swingin tryin to prove ya can still be gay-and-fight//
I thought you was a souja man well I don't see ya platoon, your crews gone and left you to fend for yourself, no suprise when ya look like a baboon//
Oh by the way nice hat, now I know why you call yourself deadSouLjaH, its cos I'd wanna be dead too if I looked like that!!//

·SiNiStEr·:
fuck me.. i did a real detailed vote and i suppose i hit back..

Deadsouljah shit was weaker than u usually drop, you can do better than that.

Nice verse bez.. unity with multis and bars is comin along..

Vote - bez

vitodeluca:
Deadsoulja- Umm, nothin' really jumped out at me in ya verse, allright punches I guess, the first part highlightin' all the words like that kinda detracted from the flow more than helpin' it, IMO.  Plus some a ya multis aren't really multis dogg.  Anyhow, like I said, some decent punches, like 1 personal is all I counted, that's about it,

overall-3.5/5

Bez, bez, bez, nice verse man.  Couple ya punches I thought were real dope, like
You a soulja? well I'm the army-slayer, tryin to act tough when the only clips (Clipse) you've ever loaded has been into your cd-player// (haha)
and

Did you study the dictionary all day-and-night to write that rhyme right? shits still weaker than a queer with no fists, swingin tryin to prove ya can still be gay-and-fight//

Some of ya punches were kinda off, especially ya last couple bars.  Still, steadily improvin', which is cool, so overall

3.9/5

Winner- Bez, incorporated some more personals and just had better punches IMO

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