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Lyrics To my first Demo Track...Subway... Feedback would really be appreciated.
·SiNiStEr·:
add a fews bars to each.. hard to crit this cuz flow is essential
|JEM|ILL|:
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 26, 2003, 04:19:03 PM ---add a fews bars to each.. hard to crit this cuz flow is essential
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cant add new bars to each... thats how it goes with the beat...
8Trikz:
nice...like sin said kinda hard to critiq diss shit...sound like one of dem songs like fab's "Into You"...ready ta hear it...i should put my prototype of dat otha track I'm doin on tha demo ta see wut folk think of it...
|JEM|ILL|:
--- Quote from: 8trikz on August 26, 2003, 04:25:51 PM ---nice...like sin said kinda hard to critiq diss shit...sound like one of dem songs like fab's "Into You"...ready hear it...i should put my prototype of dat otha track I'm doin on tha demo ta see wut folk think of it...
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F-A-B-O!...lol into you's ill, but mines got more meaning in it then the regular love song does, kinda personal...lol metaphors with it too...
.:TimeLock:.:
i liked it man the second verse was tighter than the first to me
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