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~·SiNiStEr· vs Onetime~
·SiNiStEr·:
yeah vito shoot
vitodeluca:
Ayight,
Onetime-Ya verse....well, it was pretty hard and attacking, and you had a lot of pretty hard bars. The problems was some of your punches didn't really hit that hard, and you lacked very much creativity and wordplay. I mean, besides the whole "head split like the excorcist" line, I didn't really see any metaphorical content or imagery. Flow was pretty good :-\, but still, could use some work. Overall I gotta give ya like
3.3/5 overall
Sinisteezy- Umm, no disrespect to onetime, but ya verse was just in a whole nother league, I don't really see why ya took this battle but that's cool. Anyhow, besides your first line (which the flow was a little off in) ya verse was off the hook man.
~Onetime'z ya name, clever, coincientally ya bit-onetime, got bitched-onetime, got restitched-onetime, itz sad when all it takes tah 'out spit' you iz-one-dumb-mime!//
best line of the verse right there, tiiiiiigggghhhht....nice all the way through, pretty much. Last line was tight too. Only thing I could take away from it is ya had maybe 2 filler-esque bars, i.e.
~What the fuck is this resuscitated vet, walkin around like his shit-dont-stink, ask Overseer when it comes to differentiatin between spittin and bitin, the bitch-dont-think!//
I mean, it just didn't hit that hard, and..
All Im seein is a bitin-on-a-rag, spit washin ya cd's is the only time you ever gonna spit-on-a-track, U runnin away but now mah shits-on-ya-back//
The whole "spit on a track meta" has been done so many different ways, it seems kinda played.
Allright, overall, you had real good multis and flow, and if you came a couple harder in parts it woulda been even better.
Overall I'd say 4.1/5
Vote- Sin
·SiNiStEr·:
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 30, 2003, 05:28:22 PM ---
~All Im seein is a bitin-on-a-rag, spit washin ya cd's is the only time you ever gonna spit-on-a-track, U runnin away but now mah shits-on-ya-back//
--- End quote ---
that supposed to be a bitch-on-a-rag.. woops
Slim-x:
How I Vote.
I Vote on
Over all flow.
Personals
Hits
And If it is funny.
And let you know how i rated.
so here we go.
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Tha Regulator
Over all flow = It had good flow
Personals = They Where cool but could of been more.
Hits = Nice hits but could have been alittle harder.
And If it is funny = Some parts where funny.
And let you know how i rated = 7.5
--- Quote from: Tha Regulator on August 30, 2003, 09:39:47 AM ---yall whatch this fanstastic shit that i spit at SINISTER, murderen his wack-shit, and twisten his mind so far around hell be thinkin he did a backflip//
how dare this fag try to test tha greatest INFLICT, dispurse heat to weak rappers like SIN and turn em to another statistic on tha "Rappers Found Dead" list//
my lyrical hollow-tips rip through this niggaz face and make his head spin like tha EXCORCIST//
can you match-this?, not even close bitch, fuckin with me will get ya damn-ass-kicked, visiously blasted,embamed and wrapped in saran plastic//
ill leave you bein lowerd in your cow-dung-caskit, cause your family didnt want to waste there money on this stupid-ass-kid//
you still wanna fuck with me, get verbally slattered on the internet for the whole world to see//
*CHSHHHHHH* oh...wait we have an incoming, youve been charged with lyrical stupidity, and the plees been recieved, 1...2...3...YOUR GUILTY//
when awards come in for next week, im going to nominate SIN for the worst emcee in WCC history//
and you know you been a reject all threw your life, even your momma didnt want you she threaten to slit her wrist with a knife//
so she tried to mold and shape you into the impossible, she relized theres no way in hell she can save this lost-soul//
so she took your ass to the mental hostpital, now your just a worthless bitch who no one cares if your alive-at-all//
*SINISTER* "PLease Stop Your Hurting Me"
Fuck no bitch im not done with this verbal slayin, but you best not wait so get on your damn knees and start prayin//
cause the lords the only one who can save you now, So Open To Jesus and take that pressious vouw//
Ask the lord To Come into your heart and save your soul, cause the ends comin for you and if you dont, you know where your about to go//
so close your eyes and take your last breath, cause when I push post you will be reachin your death, and satan will be comin to lay you to your final rest//
--- End quote ---
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Now For SiNiStEr
Real Quik this was not ya best work but its was still cool.
so don't get mad you have some real skillz.
Over all flow = Ya flow was cool but some parts went off abit and came back.
Personals = You had some stuff like Him bittin but im not sure how to vote on that cause
he said it was not true.
Hits = Well like i said tha one real hard hit you had was about him bittin
And If it is funny = some parts where funny
And let you know how i rated = 7.1
So 7.5 vs 7.1 = Tha Regulator.
Why Cause over all he had alittle more points.
and i was unsure how ta vote on the Bittin Part.
Come Vote In My Battle Slim-x vs Storm.......
--- Quote from: ·SiNiStEr· on August 30, 2003, 05:28:22 PM ---~Im tha man ya shouldnt-see-queer, Thinkin ya high and mighty, bitin verses, what you dumb? Itz like you couldnt-see-seer, be grateful cuz if it wasnt for 2nd chances you WOULDNT-BE-HERE//
~False claimings of the real shit, I know you aint 'nuthin but net' but ya sneak-around-tha-swoosh, you must jackoff in circles cuz when it 'comes to bustin' you just beat-around-tha-bush!//
~All Im seein is a bitin-on-a-rag, spit washin ya cd's is the only time you ever gonna spit-on-a-track, U runnin away but now mah shits-on-ya-back//
~Ima teach this dyke-how-tah-rhyme, itz like ya lifes-outta-time, son I'll take you to the hood just so you can take a BITE-outta-crime!//
~Youz a 'native' tah writin, but its OK Im always up for hurtin-injuns, wait a sec, how I know this shit wasnt bitten, someone check a local search-engine//
~How you expect fah me to cope-wit-sensibility, when ya willin tah slope-tah-squints-ability, only way im helpin you is carvin an S out ya chest to give ya false hopes-of-invincibility//
~What the fuck is this resuscitated vet, walkin around like his shit-dont-stink, ask Overseer when it comes to differentiatin between spittin and bitin, the bitch-dont-think!//
~A question of desire, at first you wanted whats-in-hoes-jeans, but ya like ginuwine, one look at my 'head' and ya wantin whats-in-those-GENES//
~You should even be spittin, do us all a favor and just-stop, I dont think you wanna be the next emcee tah git-shot fah singin hip-hop//
~Onetime'z ya name, clever, coincientally ya bit-onetime, got bitched-onetime, got restitched-onetime, itz sad when all it takes tah 'out spit' you iz-one-dumb-mime!//
~Couldnt stand ya punishment, picture onetime in ICU-hangin, tryin tah stay tru to ya colors, but wearin yellow sunglasses is the only time I-see-you-bangin//
~My satisfaction of victory, is takin a depletin-fall, cuz once ya beat one biter.. you dun beat-'em-all!//
~A whipped-side-ho, Rip out ya left pupil so you can see how eye-right.. youz a slipped-sideshow, ima leave this whole board cryin when I rip you like I fuckin RIPPED-MAESTRO//
--- End quote ---
My vote goto = Tha Regulator.
·SiNiStEr·:
--- Quote from: Slim-x on August 31, 2003, 02:27:32 PM ---and i was unsure how ta vote on the Bittin Part.
--- End quote ---
then dont fucking vote.. im thinkin about contesting this vote.. you can say what you want but we all know this guy is a fuckin moron.. his points were all wrong..
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