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~Mack vs. Vito~ Rnd. 2 (Mack won)
vitodeluca:
Allright y'all, Mack wants a rematch cause he thinks I wrote too long a bars in our first battle, so to be fair, I said I would. Allright,
10 bars
3-0 K0
4 votes to win
explained votes only
tj if you just quote somebody else for your explanation I ain't countin your vote, and I'm spittin first so there will be no bitchin'
vitodeluca:
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)
1) fatak, as in red alert, beat mack, and he's in his crew, oh and "backups" are pirated copies of xbox games
2) mack posted a keystyle called "say my name" like destiny's child, lol
3) as in the movie "the ring" where people died from watchin a video. Gestate means to hatch a plan.
4) Oreo in reverse, black on the inside, white on the outside, and Georgio Armani
vitodeluca:
Not my best but whateva... ::)
da_notorious_mack:
Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..
lol....votes....verse done...
would ya look-at-that...
Vito brought his foot-notes-back,
how can ya repent-this..
It like spittin a verse on stage then sayin when i said that,i meant-this..
|JEM|ILL|:
Mack wins' like lays, "ya can't have jus one", this bitch cries more often than beauty pagent contestants, guess that easy booty can't be rejected,
...Wack, no point to this line...
The weakest link in VDK, like a chipped xbox ya known fa "playin' backup(s)", ya crews wackest, ya jus get "slapped the fatak-up" (1)
..Back up line is ok...Fatak line is wack as fuck...
comin outta kill kali bringin fear to this kid's-heart, the fear shit-starts, got ya mommy yellin' from the laundry "Mack what's up wit da skid-marks?" (crappin' in his pants wit fear)
um no...Played...
I'm dispersin deadly colds, when cold blooded ruger often-spits, aim the gat at mack, cause I'm known for producin' coffin-fits (coughin' fits)
Dope wordplay...
emptyin' clip magazines, I'm just "periodically able", mack's "outta his element", like plastic on a periodic table,
that really doesn't make and fuckin sense at all...
Mack quotin' beyonce, respect me like I quotes-aretha, only time mack pack's clips, is ta keep hair outta tone's-urethra (dick rider) (2)
...LOL!!1 ill...
ya got slept on bars, like prisoners sleepin' standin-up, this "pussy" needs some help, like a short handed-slut in a hand job rut,
...played and weak...
mack gotta new thug life, but tha hood ain't inta-net-passes, ya style's weak when "lackin' killa bites" (kilo bytes) like ya cut off internet-access
...dope punch...
mah bars jus lost weight , don't need to drop a novel 4 me-ta-gestate, ya shit's always had a "familiar ring", so I could kill ya via vhs-tape, (3)
wack!
leave this reverse oreo-in-da-trailer I know 8 ain't ya home-mile, like stranglin' georgio-wit-a-blazer, I jus killed ya wit ya own-style!! (4)
...weak ender...
Ill e-mail-this-bitch-threats,callin me frail-this-kid-jests..
cus now "urine in trouble" like ya jus fuckin failed-a-piss-test..*
STOP WITH THE FUCKIN USE OF MY LINE...but nice personal switch up lol...
ill snap ya neck-wit-a-touch,ruin that little rep-ya-got-up..
Vito only got the "balls-to-speak" when he put his head-ta-my-nuts..
LOL dope wordplay punch...
run an call-Elite,you fear my spits like Mack caught-the-SARS..
Vito i thought-he-hard,but to come close ta me had ta drop forty-bars!..
nice personal punch...
an when you see my "bars"-ya-hate-it,like clostraphobics bein incar-cerated..
Your prisoner wordplay was iller...dope
the boards new stars-are-make-shift..
livin in cali?..like pornstars ya trin to hard-to-fake-it..
word lol dope
get left scarred-an-naked,quit typin-ya-fool..
ya had one nice line...an even then ya were bitin-Jemuel..
I LIKE THIS LINE...lol nice personal
pop tart be like Christina,tell me you a steady-"fighter"..
but Mack is jus too much fa the web...like a heavy-spider..
played and just a filler...weak ending
Flow: Mack
Rhyme Scheme: Mack
Multies: Mack
Punches: Mack
Personals: Mack
Disses: Vito
Wordplay: Vito
Punch Play: Mack
Hardness:Mack
Lyricism: Mack
Humor: Mack
Vote: Mack
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