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Bez VS. Tha Prophecy

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Fabulous_Verstyle:
BEZ took it clearly, his verse was loooong, had SOME personals and his punches were hitting PROH. hard(@ HIS LEVEL) .

PROPH. ur verse was short nd was boring, u mostly rapped about how HOW GOOD  U R, thts how i feel it, i dont think theres ne need for XPLANATION kaz BEZ purely took it.

vitodeluca:
Yeah, bez took this, had some multis, personals, blah, blah...some a ya punches were good, some where definitely filler.  Bez, try and just bring the heat, edit out the shit that you know ain't hittin'....

Like a blackmailin wall-street-business man I'll leave ya admirin-grabbin-cock, leave ya on ya knees so ya crawl-to-whitness the fall of your rhymin-laughin-stock//
Shits a knockout homie but I'm leavin-ya-pissed, cos I punch wit so much heat is like brandy bombs steamin-from-ma-fists//
Best call ya "doc" now cos ya gunna need some stitchin, you just another victim, cos I snap backs  before I rip em cos like Marty Mcfly I get mad when somebody calls me chicken//
Got no need to mention your name in my rhyme cos after this battle you'll see it on ma list, your hands clenched in a fist throwin punches cos you pissed, let me tell ya somethin...everyone of em missed//
I'm ringin ya bell-boy, dam man ya came as soft-as-tits, I just wouldn't come back-for-more cos your shits wack-for-sure, dam there I go read back ho I just dropped-ma-tips!!//

^^^these were all kinda weak homie, I mean..yeah, they rhymed, and yeah, they had some multis, but form follows function, so work on ya content, feel me?

Proph..umm, seen better from you, some of your lines didn't make sense to me at all...i.e. the whole feelin' ya shit/quadrapeligic,  overall not very hard hittin' verse.  

My vote goes to Bez..PZ


Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..:
i cant spit anythign these days...thinkin about givin it all up...

oh and fabulous...i never talked once about how good i was...in the beginnging only because it was goin with what i was saying...i didn think mine was that bad...just short as fuck, i didnt even wanna drop anything, i was all choked n shit.

and vito...a quadrapelegic cant fell anything...get it

bez:
2-0 man

vito thanks again for the advice.  With every battle I am in the conent is becomin harder cos I dont wanna just sound like I am spittin the same shit over and over and over, feel me?

N e way I understand what you mean, I gotta work on the content like.

bez:
uppin

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