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Mack vs Onetime...

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da_notorious_mack:
No doubt...now lets get some votes...

·SiNiStEr·:
[size=8]Hi[/size]

Mack - Decent verse from Mack, sorta weak multis and you said the usual 'gun rhymes' when you yourself had alot more rhymes with -un. Pretty raw though, had some creativity, hit him wit some personals.. decent verse.

Fav. Line -
ya needa learn tai bo,even then ya chance of survival is 50/50 like a game a high-low..
an dont think i aint noticed ya title,n01 ass kisser of mister I-Bo..
^^i think we all know why i like that line

Onetime - not a real good verse, your just shouting random words, no real flow, just a freestyle type deal, the punches were punches, but they werent hitting mack and you had 1 weak personal.

Fav. Line -
Virtually~ you couldn?t see my rhymes if you was standing up and I spit them Vertically/
^^ i guess?

Numbaz..
Mack - 3.8 / 5
Onetime - 2.3 / 5

Vote - Mack

bez:
Nice battle ya'll, wasn't amazing but it was still cooo.  Glad to see your 2 still drop rhmyes and battle verses cos with every verse you both drop you both seem to improve.  Nice shit ya'll.

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MACK:  Dope verse man, glad to see you seem to be getting back to your best.  Flow was dope, multies where dope and punches where all dope.  I love the way you write man, always have done, your bars always come together to form a dope verse and you use most if not all of the keystyle elements.  DOpe shit mate.

Fav Line(s):

Son's-lines,are all regurgitated pac lyrics an the usual gun-rhymes..
Ill leave you a "refugee" an i dont mean when wyclef shout "one time"..

oh yeah remember outlawz?...watch my syllables-loot..
a imitatation that was 10 times worse than the fuckin original-group...

an now theres no stoppin-me,from rockin-thee,wit the lyrical gatlin-gun..
i mean why we even battlin-son,i came i dropped a verse..the battle-is-won..


Score:  4.00

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ONETIME:  I found your verse to be quite cool but lacking in any real complexity.  I didnt really see any multies in there and although you did have some punches they where quite weak.  

Fav Lines(s):

Cause im bringing straight heat~ and leaving a mark on your face like a football cleat/
So you better retreat~ before I have the Detectives Covering yo ass wit a white sheet/

this, I guess.

Score:  2.3

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All in all not a bad battle but far from being dope.  The winner was clear from reading the first 5 bars of each verse.  One time, I'm glad your back battling and shit but I think you gotta try and be a bit more complex with your rhymes, try paintin abetter picture with your rhymes istead of just trying to find a word to rhyme with the one you just wrote.  Your verse wasn't awful man but going up against vets like Mack your verse needs to be fire all the way thru, its almost like you run outter matches. (lol, PUN)

WINNER:  MACK

DeaDSouLjaH:
okay here goes..

MACK
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liked the verse from the first bar... thought it flowed pretty well ..and the multis were all on point....creativity was there at some parts and a few personals here and there...all in all a decently constructed verse

fav line:

oh yeah remember outlawz?...watch my syllables-loot..
a imitatation that was 10 times worse than the fuckin original-group...

ONETIME
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I agree with sinister when he said that you were jus shouting some random words..punches were okay but not very hard hitting and not many personals as mack did.. and no multis as well

OVERALL
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okay i thought the battle was pretty one-sided, one read was enough for me to know who took the battle. newayz my vote goes to mack cause he had more personals, decent punches and also he had multis which onetime didnt seem to have in his verse.

VOTE: MACK

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