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{MIDDLEWEIGHT)-Abtruse vs Teejay
T.J.:
^^unfinished, but i was late enough as it was so i posted a half-verse
Kill:
Aight then...quick overview first:
rhymes (structure, multies etc.) - abstruse
flow - abstruse
personals - tie
non-personal punches - abstruse
ABSTRUSE: Nice verse there, you had sum nice punches, also personals, none of them really hit hard though, but they were cool. Flow was aight IMO, not immaculate. The first part was way better as for wordplay and punches. The multies were mostly tight
TEEJAY: Just cause you didn't win in any category of the above don't mean you were wack but abstruse was just a lil better as for flow (yours was kinda off at times), rhymes (more original) and the punches (way more original too). It wasn't a bad verse at all, but it seemed to me you could've worked a lil more on sum stuff and then it would have been equal
VOTE = ABSTRUSE
da_notorious_mack:
--- Quote from: Kill on September 16, 2003, 09:02:23 AM ---Aight then...quick overview first:
rhymes (structure, multies etc.) - abstruse
flow - abstruse
personals - tie
non-personal punches - abstruse
ABSTRUSE: Nice verse there, you had sum nice punches, also personals, none of them really hit hard though, but they were cool. Flow was aight IMO, not immaculate. The first part was way better as for wordplay and punches. The multies were mostly tight
TEEJAY: Just cause you didn't win in any category of the above don't mean you were wack but abstruse was just a lil better as for flow (yours was kinda off at times), rhymes (more original) and the punches (way more original too). It wasn't a bad verse at all, but it seemed to me you could've worked a lil more on sum stuff and then it would have been equal
VOTE = ABSTRUSE
an thats the official vote as i aint votin in kru matches...
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Kill:
--- Quote from: Da Notorious Mack on September 16, 2003, 11:24:27 AM ---an thats the official vote as i aint votin in kru matches...
--- End quote ---
uh mack, you now supposed to be judge of this tournie? Cuz back when M Dogg was runnin this he wanted me to be (one of the judges, dunno how many ppl were supposed to be), but if you want it left to you...????????
da_notorious_mack:
--- Quote from: Kill on September 18, 2003, 08:17:41 AM ---
--- Quote from: Da Notorious Mack on September 16, 2003, 11:24:27 AM ---an thats the official vote as i aint votin in kru matches...
--- End quote ---
uh mack, you now supposed to be judge of this tournie? Cuz back when M Dogg was runnin this he wanted me to be (one of the judges, dunno how many ppl were supposed to be), but if you want it left to you...????????
--- End quote ---
nah..yo..you can vote on all dem matches now...nobody give a fuck bout this tourney so why should i?...an m dogg said ta me ta judge it thas why i was....i was gunna pm ya to vote on some of um but ya can do em all now...
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