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Da notorious mack VS wicked illness

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da_notorious_mack:
Wicked-Illness?...bitch please you a cold-at-best..
im bold-wit-text..ya against a vet wit untold-respect..
i hold the crown-still,any rook im bound-ta-kill..
past ya 1st bar,like a "Grant injury",ya verse went "down-hill"..(Grant Hill)
ya wouldnt be dope if ya were slangin-ya-verses..im bangin-wit-curses...
ya wanna chill wit tha God?..ill leave you hangin-from-churches..

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Get the picture,ya scriptures,aint hit hard..
so motherfucka i went 1 better an dropped 6 bars..

wicked illness:
1st off.....why the fuck both you freeposting in a battle...i dont want a fucking analysis.....thats why they vote when the battle is finished.....


5bars = 10 lines  ;)

votes?

ARYC:
here goes :

Wicked illness:
u need to work on a lot of stuff:most ur multis aren't real ,"am-spittin-pain", "my-shit-is-insane" for example,not only does the 2nd one have more syllables BUT only the last syllable of each rhymes....so it would be easier to point out all the real multis in ya verse(not many) than to point out ya bad ones (they are the majority)plus ya multis are forced,a lot of ppl do this,they feel like they NEED to put every single multi they can think of in the verse and it doesn't make for a good verse.
ur punches are kinda weak..."you need to elevate cuz your rhymes are lightweight
you were destined to lose that&#8217;s why I only wrote 8!!!"for example ,now it's not necessarily bad in other circumstances BUT the bar limit is 5 so u went over the bar limit (i've explained why i don't like this punch in the post b4)
2/5 :sub par but keep at it and u'll get there

Mack:
flow was nice as always ,sum nice lines but u loose points because u fed of wicked illness's verse in one line "o motherfucka i went 1 better an dropped 6 bars.. ".Most ur multis were on point,
4/5


WINNER:MACK

Kill:
Well...

WICKED ILLNESS:
You prolly not very experienced so considerin you a newbie I think it wasn't bad, but like sicstyle¨said you got alot to learn; most multis weren't multis at all, I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND why many people connect-words-for-no-damn-reason-at-all. Your punches were pretty basic too

MACK:
yup, never make references to your opponent's verse...your shit was very short, but you included a few nice lines and punches, the chillin with the god line was the best of the battle

VOTE = MACK

ARYC:
"5bars = 10 lines"

woops!!!!ur right .i'm sorry .but mack still wins though

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