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SicStyle v.s DeaDSouLjaH v.s T.J(MIDDLEWEIGHT)

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T.J.:
i think were waitin for Kill the official judge to vote, but where the fuck is he??

DeaDSouLjaH:
yeah ... where is KILL??.. .

Kill:
checkin in.......

Kill:
Aight then

(max. score 5)

DEADSOULJAH: Not bad, but I've seen better from you. You used the nice vocab you got (which can be useful at times), but sometimes it seemed like you tried to sound complicated and neglected both structural details and punches. Many of your multies (some yes) were not really multies cause they had different numbers of syllables ("MIDDLE-WEIGHT-CHAMPS"...."RIDDLE-BERATE-these-TRAMPS") or certain words you connected didn't rhyme ("CALLED-HIM-OUT"..."BACKED-OUT!!"....not even a rhyme at all cause you rhymed "out" with "out"). The punches weren't bad, some could have been worked on. There weren't many personals but I can't tell how much you got on your opponents. Overall not a bad verse at all, but you can do better IMO....3.4/5

T.J.: Unlike DS you didn't even try to make multies and luckily you ain't one of the cats who compulsively connect words for no reason...the rhyme structure was simple, but as for punches (though you could've spit more personals) your shit was quite dope, had sum original metas. Your vocab was nice too and it was quite easy to flow. You kept it simple (structurally) but it was pretty much an immaculate verse...3.9/5

SICCSTYLE: You just came hardest, simple as that. Your rhyming was the best of all and the same goes for sum of the punches. For somehow the "both of y'all" part was weaker, it was like you used the best punches to start and then came up with the rather average ones. Still your shit flowed nicely and as said had the best rhymes plus the personal shit was pretty hard...I'ma give this to you...4.1/5

WINNER = SICCSTYLE

btw...don't think 3/5 is wack or sumthin, cause if I gave a 5/5 that would be like sum of the dopest shit ever spit on this board, 4/5 is quite dope etc.

T.J.:
yay finally voted!!  ;D
congratulations amin, enjoy your belt

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