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New. Freestyle.

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PoTek:
yo i'm new here and shit...so i got litte free time and busted this rhyme
tell me what you guys think

yo this by first freestyle
and i aint goin shoke like that dude from 8 mile
cause i be split'n words fast like download'n files
what my name b? Potek
i be like big l, catching wreck on any casette deck
all i want is the bitchs,cars and my paycheck
fuck wit me, i'll snap your fuckin neck

Reef:
NOt bad,.. Try and make your shit longer..

bez:
reminds me of me when I got started.  More complexity needed homie.

PoTek:
yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P

|JEM|ILL|:

--- Quote from: PoTek on October 15, 2003, 01:18:34 PM ---yah it is kinda simple
well practise makes perfect :P

--- End quote ---

try workin on ya flow a bit...toss in some different rhyme scheme and multis too homie.

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