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A verse I wrote

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'Illicit':
well, I aint tryna dis you or anything but it was corny. i mean the subject was aight, although played out but it coulda been better.

but jus my opinion

Trauma-san:

--- Quote from: Z-Virus on October 22, 2003, 01:35:09 PM ---
--- Quote from: Buddy Holly on October 22, 2003, 06:26:48 AM ---The first few lines or so turned me off, because I'm tired of hearing people rap about their dick.  Look, you're a guy, I'm a guy, we can probably both get all the women we set our mind to, why rap about it?  Start rapping about something with substance and I think you'll show a lot more creativity, and that's when your talent can accurately be judged.  Peace~

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Lol. Is it because I've pissed you off concerning the space program of the US?
Peace :)

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Don't flatter yourself.  I have so many people that disagree with me, I don't even know who most of them are.  I don't even recognize you, and even if I did, I don't hold grudges.  I'm just saying my opinion about your rhyme.  'peace~'

·SiNiStEr·:
i liked it

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