TimeLock & Theory - The Lyrical Craft

[.:TimeLock:.]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/cylo_music.htm

theory do the first verse i do the second  then theory again. there's no chorus the verses just run into each other.


lemme see yall's feed back on this song

peace

[maximus]

THeory - lol@pussy cat like sylvester... laid back flow... got aight presence... lyrics was steady... caught some sick lines

time-lock - had more up beat flow... emotion was tight... flowen good tight confidence on the mic... shit was nice

chorus was pretty nice

theory's lyrics caught me more dan time but time had better flowen... beat was aight.. only good shit i seen on this board to date

peace

~1~

[.:TimeLock:.]

thanx for the feed back homie

there's no chorus though  

[DJ_Jay_Deee]

Dope song. All MC's came correct.

Liked how you used those piano samples.
I reackon u need to up the bass on that song. Nice fat bass would suit this song.

[T.J.]

im really feelin this song man, props

[P Nelson]

Shit sounds good , everybody came correct and the beat is nice

[da_notorious_mack]

Theory...

"pussy cat like sylvester"

"put ya girls pussy up like jake steed"

"my steez hardcore like mankind"

"pull ya card like yu-gi-o"


Timelock

"wont give up my seat easy like rosa parks"

"imma real hip hopper,fuck these phantoms of the opera"

id say theory probably had the better one liners but time had tha betta flow...yo time when i get my mic we gunna havta do a lil something nah mean?..

[I TO DA GEEZY]

dope shit yo, lol...Time, I never heared u flow like this, sound much more agressive, and delivery is much more on point...keep it up

[.:TimeLock:.]

thanx geezy how u been man hit me up on a messenger sometime

[Code Blue]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/cylo_music.htm

theory do the first verse i do the second  then theory again. there's no chorus the verses just run into each other.


lemme see yall's feed back on this song

peace

Your style reminds me a grip of Mos Def for some reason.

[.:TimeLock:.]

thanx man i take that as a big compliment  

[B.O.X.]

this song bang some,yall got some talent keep do'n yall thang yell

checc my song out on here it's posted in this section