Heavyweight Tounrey Round 1: Da Notorious Mack vs Vitodeluca

[Reef]

10 barz Maximum..

Verses Due by Monday 27th. Gives you just under a week. Im not going to be hot on time limits but if your shit aint there when i check Monday night (GMT) or Tuesday morning then you will eb DQ'ed.

The winner will battle Abtruse or Bez

[ARYC]

is it Vito's curse to face a VDK guy in the 1st round of every tournament ?
and is it his other curse to lose against a VDK guy in the 1st round of every tournament?

so far we're 2 for 2 (though i wouldn't really count the no-show a victory but whatever)

[da_notorious_mack]

DAMN...gotta battle vito again...ah well here it go...imma lil rusty so please forgive me...

Fuck a battle where you only win-if-ya-kru-decide..
ill have ya phonin "911" like Slim-an-tha-Boo-Ya-Tribe!..
ill begin-ta-bruise-ya-guys,im not fuck'n losin-the-race..
ya couldnt "scratch my record" if ya choose-ta-DJ!..
Whose-in-tha-place,im bruisin-ya-face..smash-ya-teeth..
ya viewed-as-a-fake while im dope like hash-an-weed..
i clap-at-need,then torture-him cus he thought-hed-win..
sought-his-kin,pull a shotty stand over the corpse-an-grin..
moms wishin she aborted-him,askin why did she keep-your-ass.
an when ya add my name to ya losses add the other times i BEAT-YOUR-ASS!


ten quik ones..

[T.J.]

mack, this was crap compared to what ive seen u write.

[NewJack]

Half of it didnt even rhyme. You got 10x better than that man.

[vitodeluca]

mack droppin premature but i'll e-jack ya later,mack too busy gettin wacked by nature
so he droppin weak and early like induced labor, i'll dj, scratch mack's record and hit tha fader,

mack rhymes go soft when he got no verse to write off
no beef this week?,somebody check mack's 40 for zoloft,
got an audio excuse but I won't give him the time off
no givin a fuck like a pimp hearin' a ho's cough
mack lost his touch like priests wit un willin' kids,
ya bouncin ya chin checks, and like blanks fillin' clips,
ya raps ain't killin' shit, but ya rhyme's still suspect,

wack mack vito makin' him finito, stack this win, now do I get a bye against primo?

['Illicit']

wack mack vito makin' him finito, stack this win, now do I get a bye against primo?

lol this my favorite line

[Reef]

Wasnt a bad battle, mack came pretty well, some ok multi's but nothing special compared to the shit im used to from him... Average verse in my opinion.

Vitodeluca came nicely, some cool disses and funny punches (mack lost his touch like priests wit un willin' kids). A nice verse.

Vote: Vitodeluca

(i know its a short explination but im in a hurry, if ne1 disputes this hit me up and i'll break it down)

[OpTiCaL]

wack mack vito makin' him finito, stack this win, now do I get a bye against primo?

lol this my favorite line

gots my vote

[|JEM|ILL|]

Fuck a battle where you only win-if-ya-kru-decide..
ill have ya phonin "911" like Slim-an-tha-Boo-Ya-Tribe!..
...blah...Where’s the fire in this opening this is some weak shit my man...
ill begin-ta-bruise-ya-guys,im not fuck'n losin-the-race..
ya couldnt "scratch my record" if ya choose-ta-DJ!..
The multi in this is off, the concept is madd played...Im waiting...
Whose-in-tha-place,im bruisin-ya-face..smash-ya-teeth..
ya viewed-as-a-fake while im dope like hash-an-weed..
...
i clap-at-need,then torture-him cus he thought-hed-win..
sought-his-kin,pull a shotty stand over the corpse-an-grin..
...
moms wishin she aborted-him,askin why did she keep-your-ass.
an when ya add my name to ya losses add the other times i BEAT-YOUR-ASS!
.....this is okay...



mack droppin premature but i'll e-jack ya later,mack too busy gettin wacked by nature
so he droppin weak and early like induced labor, i'll dj, scratch mack's record and hit tha fader,
...some dope lines the effect would have been better if worded differently but tis all good...

mack rhymes go soft when he got no verse to write off
no beef this week?,somebody check mack's 40 for zoloft,
...err weak...
got an audio excuse but I won't give him the time off
no givin a fuck like a pimp hearin' a ho's cough
...this is a heavyweight tournament battle isn’t it?
mack lost his touch like priests wit un willin' kids,
ya bouncin ya chin checks, and like blanks fillin' clips,
...
ya raps ain't killin' shit, but ya rhyme's still suspect,
...eww..


This was a weak battle, specially from mister Mack over there, come on man your iller then that and vito is iller then it too as he proves here...vote goes to vito..

[OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY]

*INDY???* no propositiy T! aka * Vybe *

Anyways enough of my introduction..
This was a tight battle i think from Vito's angle with his lyricism... Mack i've seen you rip shit on these cats.. but dont matter this was aight... i forgive you! lol..

Anyways my vote: Vito

Reason: Tighter flow, i felt it a lil more.. sorry mayne!

Hope this an aight vote.. if not discard it... im easy! Peace