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Now_Im_Not_Banned:
Sccit! the greatest 5 letters to ever be invented//Cleverly my similies get entered in each sentence//The penelty is mess with me you'll end up hearing lessons//Eternely, I burn the beats and spit the fluid, it's the truest shit you've ever heard//When shit occurs, I fix my words into this patern and after the track gets mastered//The hazard begins, girls watch me like I'm their calories//Assault and battery, chin checks, and they mad at me//It mostly happens when I abuse my hate//I've been accused of rape, I've been used and played//By the people that were suposed to be close to me//Now I have one concern and that's only to breathe//I don't know what is greed//Been regarded as retarded by those closest to me//Like oceans I'm deep, but like puddles I'm shallow//Religiously mallow, you wanna battle? That's prattle//I'm sleep deprived, but I'm not in Seattle.

Code Blue:
Pretty tight. Opening lines were the best IMO.

bez:
Not bad man.  You could of hit enter at the end of each line to make it easier to read but it was quite good.

I agree with the second coming, the first few lines where the best.

Kill:

--- Quote from: Bez on January 04, 2004, 09:14:03 AM ---Not bad man.  You could of hit enter at the end of each line to make it easier to read but it was quite good.

I agree with the second coming, the first few lines where the best.

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AlerG:
Sccit! the greatest 5 letters to ever be invented//

isn't that four letters but one is used twice?
just messin with ya, good verse
and damn, you've been accused of rape?

peace.

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