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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
Everbody on this page gonna feel ma rage and gonna be maybe a lil bit sage, though u'all couldnt be sage cuz yo brainz in cage, u'all throw wid blazez , while livin in chasez of yo own facez, cuz yo facez phase in Naziplacez, but u'all out of place in this world, cuz every1 of u feel da world absurd!
1 time 3rhymez, 1 time 4, 1 time 6 rhymez, 1time--------------POOR!
We all sittin here and waitin of our light-tot
While da pope pop wid his own "god"
He dont know what god is, n dont knaow what he do's a god-diss! Aint even believe a lot!
Till he setle to nettle da humenrace in squad, face to face against yoself, against maself and theirselfz, but not, think not about the others , they got even great, nice motherz, though somethimez they brew , spew botherz, r fuckin liezguyz, but criez a lot in da own tot, squat in their home, and sometime get chocked some!
Fuck dis bitchez, fuck da father ditchez bitchez, who made him rich, but aint nuttin but a bitch, pitch his dick up theyr a sin, but i'd pitch it faster up than gina lynn! Then pick him up to get some nuttz and a lot buttz, fuck dis slutz, damn i hate, but that i met'em was ma fuckin FATE!

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
Damn, i just notice, ma freestyle's shit! aint it?

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY:
*nah man... you gots potential.. just need to seperate the ryhming words with bars.. so we can read it easier.. like this... example i have here..


I ryhmed in bars, so you all can read it//
Kept the lock of my ryhmes, so the newbies could theive it//

^^ like that mayne.. but you good.. keep it up tho!

Peace! ~ 1 ~

·SiNiStEr·:

--- Quote from: * []Droposity T * on January 13, 2004, 08:33:44 AM ---I ryhmed in bars, so you all can read it//
Kept the lock of my ryhmes, so the newbies could theive it//

--- End quote ---

 :'(

AlerG:
it was ok, nothing special, peace.

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