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Bez Please...(Fuckin Mod) **Dope Diss Check it and drop feed**
bez:
This dogg must have raibies the way he bite-and-shit,
Follow ma lead right? type and actually write-sum-shit,
You a C.S.I waitin ta happen, a K.I.A but I see no action,
So I guess this is a copy and paste reaction, so I hope ya brains relaxin,
Cos ya just ain't a bloke-dat-thinks, ya mind left behind,
Ya mind may of tried but all it came up wit was who Broke-dem-links?
This board is bored of ya wack-style, fool I got your fact-file,
I rap-vile but you...."lose yourself" respect so whats this a crap-mile?,
Those wern't ma toes ya tripped over, tell me who's where them flows,
Every post ya drops a lie, bet by now ya a nose like Pinocchio's,
And every time ya drop-a-rhyme ya add more shame-to-ya-name,
Ya shits plain-in-dis-game whats next ya lookin at my shit just ta cop-a-line,
I ain't even gunna finish-this-diss, cos while slangin-I'm-thinkin,
I cud demish-this-bitch, but I'd rather leave him hangin-like-shipman!
Kill:
wow that board/bored "rhyme" was sum ill shit :o :o ;D
naw, good verse too Bez
|JEM|ILL|:
--- Quote from: Kill on January 14, 2004, 08:56:46 AM ---
--- Quote from: |JEM|ILL| on January 13, 2004, 05:11:09 PM ---Go ahead and try and find a link, that's a personal punchline...jesus christ...
--- End quote ---
u put his name in it, that don't make it personal. But I don't wanna get into this, cause I don't know when, what and how much u bit....nice verse here
--- End quote ---
Kill,
Wantin to score but can't, stop crying Bez only 1 more to go...
You ain't deep, I visited ya grave and tripped over ya toes!!
1 more to go: I beat him 3 times before, one more loss to go for him...
Visited ya grave: Sayin he's already dead cuz I beat him 3 times...
You ain't deep/tripped over your toes wordplay: Bez likes to think his writing is deep (The majority of it is and well thought out) so it's just sayin he's not and flipping it...
NOW... if yall still think it's bit, whatever this is internet shit I do on down time so it really doesn't matter what yall think, but go ahead and hunt for a link if you wanna trouble, check every bored im on or even boards im not on. If you find it, then your a good magician... LALA
This dogg must have raibies the way he bite-and-shit,
Follow ma lead right? type and actually write-sum-shit,
the bitin punches are really gettin played they've been in every verse of yours recently against me and fact is biting punches unless really well flipped are played...which is technically biting...if you gonna bomb me about biting do it with more orriginality
You a C.S.I waitin ta happen, a K.I.A but I see no action,
So I guess this is a copy and paste reaction, so I hope ya brains relaxin,
...errr pretty much another biting punch...weak punch maybe flipping it would do it much better...
Cos ya just ain't a bloke-dat-thinks, ya mind left behind,
Ya mind may of tried but all it came up wit was who Broke-dem-links?
...I get it...had to reread it..blah...
This board is bored of ya wack-style, fool I got your fact-file,
I rap-vile but you...."lose yourself" respect so whats this a crap-mile?,
...ummm...nah
Those wern't ma toes ya tripped over, tell me who's where them flows,
Every post ya drops a lie, bet by now ya a nose like Pinocchio's,
...now thats just childish
And every time ya drop-a-rhyme ya add more shame-to-ya-name,
Ya shits plain-in-dis-game whats next ya lookin at my shit just ta cop-a-line,
...Work down some of the syllables in the second line so that the AB BA rhyme scheme works in rhythm...
I ain't even gunna finish-this-diss, cos while slangin-I'm-thinkin,
I cud demish-this-bitch, but I'd rather leave him hangin-like-shipman!
demish???
Bez...I hope your just playing with this shit fareal, cuz I read Bez's rhyme book and Bookmarked it, it shows a helluva lot more skill then this diss...
LaLa
T.J.:
there'd be no point trying to find a link now, you've probly already edited the verse u had it in in the first place! and "only 1 more to go"..... nowhere near personal... one more to go till what?? another loss?? that could be for any fucking person..... lala bitch
bez:
Man, get on to you reviewing my verse, lol.
I wrote that verse in about 5 minutes, I posted it and then deleted it. It was just a small verse just to show peeps that I ain't just bowed out of this shit just like that.
Demish, was a typo, was mean't to say deminish. (I have actually been making alot of typo's lately, wierd)
By the way I would say that the verses in ma book of rhymes prob took me the same amount of time to write. Ah well.
N e way Jem, lets leave this this shit now ay?
..Tinky Winky
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