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check it
« on: January 15, 2004, 07:04:03 PM »
i tried shrooms, i drink brew/
thats all i rap about cause shit, thats all i do/
i rap for myself, i rap casue of devin the dude/
i expect no sympathy, it means nothin to me/
just another word in the dictionary/
i expect props, while i kick shit/
enough raw raps to make you wish you writ it/
or wrote it, if your not better than me dont quote it/
im sick of dicks writing shit in hopes then they post it/
its wack as fuck and they dont know it/
then some critics, come and diss it/
"your raps were ok, but mine are terrific"
im like r kelly, in that im greatly sucesful/
point out some bitches, i pull the best ho/
you pick one, she turns lesbo/
straight up, im too too tight/
i get down and dirty like a food fight/
you stay pretty and clean/
then expect your diss to be effectin me/
im rich as fuck, sellin by the quarter/
watch me pull out my wallet, its torture/
pay off enforcers with mad benjamins/
while you think your a playa spendin 10's/
i laugh at that, pass me the J, smoke it up and pass it back/
dont like skinny hos, casue the ass is flat/
im 17, so im passin that, to younger men/
im only fuckin 10's/if i get drunk then maybe a little less/
my firrst time to write in monthes, a little rusty/
now im bout to find some bad bitch to fuck me, then get my money/
im out



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Re:check it
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2004, 11:08:05 PM »
very interesting post. Not the rhyme structure you used to post, more like just free rhyming. But decent, as you said, "i rap for myself"
 

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Re:check it
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2004, 09:23:19 AM »
i liked it..
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Re:check it
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2004, 03:49:44 PM »
It was aight man!
 

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Re:check it
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2004, 06:13:17 PM »
 

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Re:check it
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2004, 06:30:50 AM »
yeah i liked it too. pretty simple but it seemed very spontaneous, like M said, free rhyming
 

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« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2004, 01:46:57 AM »
That shit is pretty dope, and it was no accident//
That I felt it like a virgin getting raped by an African//
 

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Re:check it
« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2004, 11:12:01 AM »
I felt it like a virgin getting raped by an African//

uuuuhm... yea.... almost as gay as your "we got big dicks, we're not from japan"