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AlerG:
not the greatest keystyle, ok i guess, peace.

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY:
WTF? why you tripping yo'self over Ceeride.. you should be god dayum honorued you got some feedback, hollaring and hooting, shhhhiiiat im tripping over my raps that aint got no feedback except my own.. dayum quit whining.. he just said "ok" if ya dont like it.. shove it.. no offense, but we work hard i do to spill my pain to paper and if you gotta trip on a vote.. then i'll take it coz its better than none.. aite peace..

Ceeride... dont let no body trip on you man.. i gotcha back..
call me a dickryda? lol.. haha.. i'll just laugh coz i'd expect that from anyone who's pissed off .. lol anyways peace!

'Illicit':
yo look, the melanin part was a joke aight, and ur rhyme imo was ok, why, because I think your lines dont match, readin one line and then the next theres nothing they have in common, get some punches, metaphors and multies tho multies aint everything but helpful if brought to the table right. develop a flow, keep practicing.

its like :

--- Quote ---im gonna rap black cuz im gonna be black ma mind born black get back, son! u cant kill dis skillz//
u cant kill like me, cuz everythin u sings just things bout Gs, girls, cars, fat MCs and unpayble billz//
--- End quote ---

this was good cuz the lines matched, tho too long, the flow is off and well, its a played out cliche. coulda made it sound more interesting. it may be a punchline in a way, but a soft one, it wouldnt help beat the opponent when voted on.

just keep at it.

i aint too good at explainin but here, i aint trippin

thanks indy, ill holla at ya bout collabos

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aite i'll holla at you soon!
peace man!

you on msn?

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
okay, all good,....sorry men, i got dumb and , i admit, did bad ba maself, cuz i ought to be glad u gave me votez and thanx at all
i had a bad time last few dayz so i was a lil bit irritable, im sorry!
ma execution was strange, wasnt it?
i think u are all right wid yo oppinions and imma practice it out, man, i swear, imma do this!
and  i think da freestylez wasnt bad at first, but there are a lotta linez didnt make sence, but some linez werent bad at all!and u saw it, thats all good!
so i cant apologize da way i acted b4,...but if i wouldnt try i wouldnt gain or lose and both is important i guess....
so thanx, Illicit aka CeeRide, whateva this meanin :) u gave me some certitude what da mistakez were,.....and i didnt chafe any time, Indecisive,
u dont sound all like indecision himself  :)
but okay al good, thanks guys!
i get everything!
peace
 :'(

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