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tell me how u feel (and) or battle!

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'Illicit':
lol, well go get ya sum melanin, that oughta help

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
lol, well go get ya sum melanin, that oughta help

what da fuck?
why aint u able to say sum real thinx and justrunnin yo mouth!
that ought be help?
okay, tell me what was halfassed help posted by Illicit aka CeeRide!?
fuckin name it aint even a fight its just mums arguments which hit me over!?
dumb man, just dumb!
i bet u cant even tell me what you think is bad to ma freestyle,.......cmon, son, tell me!

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
lol, tell me now what u can say to this one:


ive known alotta people who gotta fear of sum people ,other people, people like they have neva had to be//
i see saw have seen it everyday the way people talk, speak but say nuthin//
walked around but saw nuthin, cuz allway hide their eyez from somethin//
singin bout da healthy world, and tryin to feel everything real but its absurd//
they picked on sum others and raped all their muthers, so there are now the sons of da sins//
their fins in the air, aginst the others its like aginst da breath aginst da sphere till u breathe da death//
till da death breathe you, eat you thru and dont even say thank you, too//
cuz he knows da thong and stuff , he snuff it thru everythin and all cuz of ma agression-call ...//
 i killed ma favorite doll and ma old model at all cuz allot of em wrote wid ma blood "ur damn hitler!" on da wall!//
u dont know ma name da hood ma foot, ma sole ma greatest hall where ive rhyme all da time , i fucked u too//
ive neva called u, pussys, neva wanted u to rate about ma fate , hate me thru and tell girls aint able be rap,i rap back, shit on yo true!//
cuz know u what bitchez?, iam a fuckin girl and mayb b able to kill sum wannabe-Gs and stuff, try better!//
but u know ma mind, ma mind finds a way to write some rights of  humen/woman in one of all in 1 fuckin letter!//

just rate it first but can battle 2 if u wanna spit aginst da wind:)
peace
battle is nuthin personal, i guess!

'Illicit':
yo, wtf? first of all half of the shit u wrote was bs cuz  "I see saw have seen it" and the rest of your so called "rate my battle-rhyme" makes about as much sense as if u would think your coming here is valuable to the board so spare me your "wisdom".

look, your shit is if rated about average and receives an "ok" on my scale. I aint the best myself but I know enough to rate and judge rhymes and beat that shit you wrote anytime. here, my honest opinion. deal wit it

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
tahts okay man, just come down and relax sum,...i understood yo meanin and i said its okay, but cen u tell me why u say its "ok"
cuz u gave me an answer though u didnt even get da question...
just tell me what can i do better, or what du u think aint good enough or bad or sumthin....
what da fuck du u mean wid ma "wisdom"?
i didnt get it! i have neva claim im sage or something...
so man dont be so angry, b/c i accepted yo fuckin mind, but i guess u dont respect me.......
but it doesnt matter at all,...
and know u what? i aint valuable, believe me, i heard it thru everywhere, so i would neva think, claim or somethin else, but just dont give a fuck and forget it, u rated ma shit, and i know i aint as good as you, but imma work and try and mayb one time gain some respect,...but dont care
thanx tho u even gave me sum answeres,...
cu
peace

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