Dreamz-vs-Tha Prophecy

[Dreamz]

20-line max
5 votes win
3-0 ko
You can spit first
deadline monday

[Dreamz]

My words are hotter than Britney Spear's Toxic//
the dj spinns the shit so me and my crew can roc it//
I am still a rookie in this game, but i plan to be the best//
I unload my verbal ak and hit u everywhere except the vest//
You get blasted in the face like a pornstar with cumshots//
The Prophecy no a wannabe Cause you think your so hot//
I'll let you in on my Prophecy this battlel is done and over//
Better find a horse shoe fuck it i'll give you a four leaf clover//
Your name sound like you found it in the bible//
I'll knock out the best mc's for my survial//
I got untapped skills, you asking guys for thrills//
I use a verbal knife and cut ya so your blood spills//
If you had a crew I'll kill them too, one after another//
Your old and broken like hulk hogan " come on brother"//
Fuck it if I lose I lose what is it to you//
wait no I'll come through...and rally destory you//
Go ahead and play off my verse i don't care//
So bring what you got I did cause I was dared//
If you are as good as say you are........Fine//
Bring it And destroy me under five lines//(1)

(1)Thats a challenge if your up to it

[Dreamz]

does this mean i win by default?/

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

yo man i wasnt aroudn a computer until today man...so ill drop rite now if u sitll want it to count.

yo listen..

fuck it...like ghandi ya battle raps are weak and starvin for "verbal content"/
u so easy to take advatage of, its like u an alter boy at a boston convent//
now my bombs-sent, laser guided with precision n night vision/
u jus fucked up dogg, like the US army bombin canadian citizins//
jus sit back n listen, cuz im gonna re-arrange the way u look at life/
after i put u into my lyrical spell, youll end up slicin ya wrists wit a knife//
im causin u so much strife, i got u suicidal n its "killin you"/
ima spit 12 bars like 12 shots out my clip, im "fillin you"//
now im "billin you", cuz them shells dont enter ya chest fo free/
theres blood on the pavement, cuz u got ya ear to tha street//
now its time fo defeat, u shakin in ya boots cuz u full of fear/
so jus go back to hoopin gerbals like ya man Richard Gere//

LOL

12 bars...dont need 20

votes

[.:TimeLock:.]

lol that was entertaining

Dreamz u had an ok verse but u need work your shit's just kinda basic

prophecy spit a ill 12 bars and took this with ez  he had strong metas and punches and some funny shit in there at the end to make u laugh.


vote - Prophecy

[Kill]

pretty much agree with TimeLock. Prophecy's was less simplistic and it had sum really funny punches. Dreamz' was aight, not bad for a newbie, flow and punches were there, but Prophecy definitely came tighter

VOTE = PROPHECY

[Dreamz]

2-0 you
the only way to get better is to battle and learn
yo nice battle

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

ya man its all about learning and growing as u battle...u have a lot of potential man i can see u getting real good...anyways man thanks for the props

2-0

[TiNmaN]

Cool verses by both, but lke every1 else said so far, gotta go w/ PROPECHY. Rhyme was more complex and less knowable as far as what the next line is gonna be. Keep at it....

[Dreamz]

yo
you win
thanks for the battle
Its all about learning and growing