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Independant Reliance (FEEDBAK, put heart into this 1)

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maximus:
altho this peice was boring to me

Far frum RUSH-A-BLE, buck shotz make ya say "Never seeen SUCH-A-WHOLE//

that shit was ill to me stay up

~1~

bez:
As Maxi said the rhyme seemed to be thrown together just using words that rhyme but not really in a constructive way.  Almost like every line was wrote with no thought but just with a few words and then a word that rhymed with the last line.

The peice was ok and shit but wasn't any thing amazing.

TiNmaN:
^^ Yea i feel what yall 2 are sayin, n i thank u for ur input. When i put on the thread "Put my heart into this 1" That was jus sumtin to try to get ppl in here lol cuz i hadnt been gettin no replyz on nottin i was droppin. But its all good, thanks to those who dropped feed so far, still UPPIN

Dreamz:
yo that was tight
keep it up

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