Cold Game (Feedbak PLEAZE)

[TiNmaN]

(2X)
My game is cold, colder than ice//
I wont hesitate to shoot a motha fucka twice//
My game is coldddd.....colder then ice//
I wont hesitate to shoot a motha fucka twice//
My game is cold, colder then ice//
My game is colder then newly aquired frost bite....
My game is cold.....
(2X)

Similar to tha arctic//
Gota sharp stick, Heavy in poundz//
Droppin bodiez like goundz, lettin off multiple roudz//
Fuck tha town....Los angelez....new york//
Sick-made tacticz unlike mickey-Rourke//
Delivern worse sakz then linez by cube in tourque//
Weaponz on deck of all-sortz//
Hot, smokin like newportz//
Boston tea party actionz, burin the courtz//
All over the map//
If the government was a single target, get shot w/ a GAT//
BELIVE THAT//
Arabic sudicde bomberz invade, 25 blockz a C4, NO SWITCH BLADE//
Way to CHILDISH//
Cerebellum on sum WILD-SHIT//
Cracked-out//
Almost Blamed-out, wabbed out//
Map technologist cuz i RE-Route//
Str8 shoot out, kill em all, then i am out//
Game is cold........

(2X)
My game is cold, colder than ice//
I wont hesitate to shoot a motha fucka twice//
My game is coldddd.....colder then ice//
I wont hesitate to shoot a motha fucka twice//
My game is cold, colder then ice//
My game is colder then newly aquired frost bite....
My game is cold.....
(2X)

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Sup!

Been along time tinman... back for good i hope.. that would be tight in audio... holla when its done! other than that i liked the flow, and the scheme.. You kept the rawness all the way through.. the hook was tight!

[kickz_deluxe]

sumthin new. i thought alot about it n i like it cuz it aint such a brainless one. i liked tha boston-tea-party passage very much. keep it up dawg! id like to hear how tha audio soundz cuz i cant imagine how u gon make tha verse.
tha whole seems interstin n promising!

[TiNmaN]

Thanks to tha 2 that dropped they thoughtz so far, i appriciate it. N' i will hav this on audio soon, i ll 4 sho let yall peep it
peace.......