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Janni:
there's a thin line between all things you see
your friends your dogs and your family
Your street your hood your whole city
Your state your fate and even your country.
 
brother listen ,please believe in me
there were so many things you couldn't do, hear or see
but one day all things come together and we'll all be free
the whole world united , one big family

there's a thin line between all things you see
between the one who's lost and the one who succeed
but one day there'll be only god judging you
knowing all the things you've done and you'll do

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I know it's not good, but english isn'T the language i speak best

kickz_deluxe:
first of all: i understood whut u wanted to express. i think u should choose another wordz to make it sound more difficult..i dont know how to explain it but i should do tha same with ma writtenz... when i read i thought u wrote it for tupacs hail mary beat. the flow just rembered...
now try to find anuther wordz n it gon be a promisin piece!

by tha way: where u from?
english aint my motherlanguage too...

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
hu?
i think it wasnt all good, kickz is right, u should write some complex shit!
but i think thats yo first time, aint it?
so it wasnt all bad too!
yes where r u from?
r u female?
i am.........peace

Janni:
I'm german  :-\

i only write in german.
This was my first time i did something in english.
Got to practice some more.

@ wincedspell : no i am male

kickz_deluxe:
u r german?

whutz your hometown? r u from berlin???munic???
north, south, east, west???

i know alot bout germany, u can believe me... :'(

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