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Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe

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*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
where r da votez?
 ???  ???  ???


 :'(

Kill:
ok, i haven't read it, if you want me to vote i will and give u a reason but if u think i'm too biased i won't waste my time on this...

kickz_deluxe:
damn, didnt i say itz over? i dont think ur biased n even if i m sure u wont show it with teasin me or such shit, ya know?
finally we aint kids, are we?
so please give your vote n believe me, i wont say u was biased.  :-*... ;D

peace

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
funny conversationz right here  8)

Kill:
Ok Skillz, urs wasn't bad, nice to have u back here spittin, most of your multies worked, flow was ok. Some of ur punches were pretty good which makes sum of the other lines look a bit less well thought-out, but overall u hit a couple times and I liked ur shit

Kickz, last time my vote went to u but ur verse had the same weaknesses this one had and this time it was even a bit worse: I could not flow most of that shit and the multies often didn't really work. Also you use big ass words sumtimes but make no or little sense ("admirin his self-admiration" eg, or callin him a "anthropoid ape", that might be a dictionnary word, but the diss itself is lame). Rather keep ur words simple and hit with good multies (look at Mack's verses for example). I think you got potential but u need to work on sum technical aspects of writin...just sum advice

VOTE = SKILLZ

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