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Inspectah

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Cutting Down -- CHECK
« on: March 15, 2004, 02:59:55 PM »
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as your head-rocks, or you kneck-pops, shake dem hips til those legs-flop.
i see two-shaking, two-cheeks, speachless like when i see new-sneaks.
you-waiting? for me-to, greet-you, swipe you into my arms from your feet-too?
fell-in-the-bed, im eggin-for-head, got the celing mirror to speak-to.
take-it slow, no time to waste, make-it grow, you know the-deal.
i overflow, am i sober no! im like pringles when your pop my-seal.

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What ya'll think? cut the multi's down and made em make sense.. i wanna work on em more! check it!

peace !

« Last Edit: March 15, 2004, 03:00:30 PM by Poet @ Heart »
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Dreamz

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Re:Cutting Down -- CHECK
« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2004, 07:40:42 PM »
sound good keep it up
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Inspectah

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Re:Cutting Down -- CHECK
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2004, 02:58:28 PM »
Thanx man, it was just something i decided todo, to see if i could cut down on multi's and try not to force them or shit. hopefully its aight!


Peace
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Dreamz

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Re:Cutting Down -- CHECK
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2004, 04:21:10 PM »
They sound good to me
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Inspectah

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Re:Cutting Down -- CHECK
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2004, 09:48:22 AM »
Chars boyio! anymore feedback? aint get slept on again.. :)
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