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Cutting Down -- CHECK

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Inspectah:
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as your head-rocks, or you kneck-pops, shake dem hips til those legs-flop.
i see two-shaking, two-cheeks, speachless like when i see new-sneaks.
you-waiting? for me-to, greet-you, swipe you into my arms from your feet-too?
fell-in-the-bed, im eggin-for-head, got the celing mirror to speak-to.
take-it slow, no time to waste, make-it grow, you know the-deal.
i overflow, am i sober no! im like pringles when your pop my-seal.

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What ya'll think? cut the multi's down and made em make sense.. i wanna work on em more! check it!

peace !

Dreamz:
sound good keep it up

Inspectah:
Thanx man, it was just something i decided todo, to see if i could cut down on multi's and try not to force them or shit. hopefully its aight!


Peace

Dreamz:
They sound good to me

Inspectah:
Chars boyio! anymore feedback? aint get slept on again.. :)

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