Author Topic: bored (Read 125 times)

Tax · « **on:** April 04, 2004, 06:32:09 AM »

i jus started wid dis rap shit u can call me an learner
but soon i'll b as good as da mack an terra firma
im on an earner, i gotta make da cash
but 4 now im a burner,so cum on lets gets mashed
cause wen its comes to blazin green i jus cant resist
u know i've lit more lghters than a fuckin arsonist
burnin shit till da shit collapse
all dis shit can happen by listenin 2 my raps
my flow so's sick it could pursuade a man 2 kill
jus like wen me and my boy mack find dat little fucker will.

'Illicit' · « **Reply #1 on:** April 06, 2004, 06:05:08 AM »

yeh man arrogant shit is hot. if u really a starter then that was tight dawg.
I jus wouldnta mentioned that u a learner cus nobody wanna hear that. jus spit ur shit, and in time practice using a bit more complexity and wit to it.

peace

da_notorious_mack · « **Reply #2 on:** April 06, 2004, 09:31:42 AM »

i liked it..specially the last line lol

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc · « **Reply #3 on:** April 12, 2004, 03:40:54 AM »

Quote from: Tax on April 04, 2004, 06:32:09 AM

i jus started wid dis rap shit u can call me an learner
but soon i'll b as good as da mack an terra firma
im on an earner, i gotta make da cash
but 4 now im a burner,so cum on lets gets mashed
cause wen its comes to blazin green i jus cant resist
u know i've lit more lghters than a fuckin arsonist
burnin shit till da shit collapse
all dis shit can happen by listenin 2 my raps
my flow so's sick it could pursuade a man 2 kill
jus like wen me and my boy mack find dat little fucker will.

cool...

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