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BATTLE RAP...2 new Keystyles.

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Now_Im_Not_Banned:
Rhyme 1:

I'm comin' back for those who said I can't rap//
And I'm runnin' this show, I'll pretend it's track laps//
And that's that, I slap back//
My inc will murder you like an ax and a masked man//
Like pac-man, I eat you fruits and gain power//
Get beat to death, I eat the flesh in the same hour//
A planes faster, so I drop bombs on soft kids//
But just like Pearl Harbor I bomb you twice, aw shit//
1941 and 2K1 in the box office//
Bringin that rad-ish, quit being so bitter//
Overtaken by this tyrant, Mussolini or Hitler//
I would finish you off, but I'll save the embarrassment//
Cuz your existance's sad, like the same sex marraiges...


Rhyme 2:

Ambigious rhymes containing contortions//
Your flesh consumes your soul like a baby abortion//
I'm saving the corpses, but to eat I'm reluctant//
I only eat MC's on the mic, when I'm bustin'//
This ain't nerd rap, it's a prototype//
You can't comprehend my brilliance like a foreign guide//
Talk shit, and I'll pop up, like a porno site//
Strangle you with the chord of my 4 inch mic//
Clandestine messages, some subliminal//
But I don't rap in Hebrew, I'm a din that's irresistible//
A criminal, But I haven't killed any lesbos//
I impregnate them, and send their ass to Fresno...

·SiNiStEr·:
is there a purpose in that.. if u wanna battle i'll battle ya..

TiNmaN:
Dope ass shit rite there doggy. Ya need to drop more for realla

LP:
Decent drop,

You need too structure ya bars more imo.  Your punches are kind of weak too.  You should focus on creativiity.  Try and add Metas/Similes/Wordplay.  Try not too add so many fillers too, cuz thats what ya verse mainly was;rhyming words..

"I would finish you off, but I'll save the embarrassment//
Cuz your existance's sad, like the same sex marraiges..."

^^fav bar

Keep droppin
Pz~

Primo:
i'll battle ya.

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